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Reloaded2yrPostedI dropped this after 320 chapters. The story is interesting, the lore is attractive and with a slow space and a part of the time you don't have enough information and the MC. My biggest problem is that this story has disorganized chapters out of place. These are the memoirs of the MC or something similar to it, each volumen represents some part of the story of the MC. But they are not necessarily in chronological order. That's all nice and all, but when you get to a pick in the story and suddenly start a new volumen and is of another point of the life the MC is sharing, the worst part is that there is not even a little bit of preambule to this change, the new volume starts with a character you don't know or care taking half a chapter. There are chapters of other volumes in between. You end up unblocking a chapter to find it was from the previous volume. And this last thing is really problematic, as the author doesn't seem to care or try to correct this mistake.
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yes, it's starting to irk me that they don't have money for food but spa all the time
"My WORRY," he said, "is that during this time, your… women… took off for a month at the spa. On coin which, properly speaking, is still my wife's." - Reloaded2yrCommented
Take your time and be safe
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"ask math no questions you don't want the answers to" simply beautiful
"Too bad, kid. Ask math no questions you don't want the answers to. So, our tunnels keep the humans from killing us more than eight at a time. How would you win?" - Reloaded2yrCommented
Toy story must be fun for you
Imagine sitting in your room playing with your doll and it suddenly spoke with emotions. Adding to that, the doll didn't even have mechanisms enabling its speech, it was purely made out of cotton. This was what Red felt at the time when the server humanoid spoke to him. - Reloaded2yrCommented
that's not something to say to your sister
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The names remind me of The Legend of the five rings
'Old man, I have a name! My name is Shams!' even though Shams was trying to say his own name, Master Wushu can only hear mumbled words from Shams. - Reloaded3yrCommentedCh 31 Struggle
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Gon, wrong novel...
A huge platform rose from the floor, completely shrouding the stage in darkness. Medusa looked at this horror. - Reloaded3yrCommented
Wang ling killed you like a couple of times
Soon, a small cube had materialized in the entity's hand which glowed in bright rays as it spun around. The existence stared at the two Nero's and spoke, "Welcome to the Transmission Zone of the Universe Ring, I am the eyes that watch over this domain, Guardian of the door to the Origin Star, otherwise known as the World of Promise. You may call me the All-Seer, usually you'd have been transferred to the World of Promise upon successfully awakening your consciousness, but as you've done so beyond the standard time, I have summoned you here to not only teach you but to grant you a special gift." - Reloaded3yrCommented
she could use this to ask her dojo to bring her money
Shi Xueman could tell that Ai Hui was clueless. She pointed at a seemingly unremarkable tree in the corner of the yard and explained, "That is a message tree. The leaves of a message tree are different from those of a normal tree, as every single leaf has the same pattern of veins. When it receives a message, the tree drops one of its leaves with the message written on it. It is a wood elemental technique. Did you not learn this in class?" - Reloaded3yrCommented
later on she will let everyone grab her to compare hands...
“At all costs,” Shi Xueman said coldly. “The clan will utilize all its power, so check it thoroughly for me.” - Reloaded3yrReplied to Gryffinpuff18
die
The families of those dead laborers would receive a compensation fee, while those who survived were able to receive a large sum of money. In regards to this, the Avalon of Five Elements was never stingy. Fatty prepared to go home. His family was filled with orphans and widowed mothers, and he had to provide for them. The burdens that he carried far exceeded Ai Hui’s. - Reloaded3yrCommented
if you're a collector you would take this to sell even if it is not much money at least is something
The crude wooden shelves that he made were thrashed to the ground. The swordplay manuals were scattered across the floor. Some of these manuals, the owner had retrieved from distant cities. The sword rack that he had wiped and cleaned every day were stomped to pieces by the debt collectors. According to the owner, that rack used to reside in the abode of a sword expert. The flying sword on it had been used to shed the blood of thousands and intimidate the mighty heroes of the past. The Nine Tone Sword Chime that hung under the eaves was also smashed and fragmented. It, too, had its own lofty history as a noteworthy, prized possession of the Nine Tone Sword Sect in the past. When Ai Hui witnessed these acts, like a terribly wounded wolf that had been pushed to the brink, he lost control and frantically lunged forward. - Reloaded3yrCommented
the owner didn't see it as a business it was a passion for him, hence it wasn't about money it was about being happy with the school
Ai Hui had tried to persuade the owner to switch to bodybuilding, and such. These concepts would at least had more prospects than Swordsmanship. The owner flew into a rage and berated him. At that point of time, Ai Hui realised that the owner’s business management skills were truly appalling.