Yeah, that would be a smart idea, I just don't know what name I'd give it.

Well, reviews are supposed to be a helpful tool, it's another thing entirely what the reviewer makes of it. And I don't think his review was helpful in any way whatsoever. Firstly, if you can't expand on a point you made, just don't make the point in the first place. Secondly, you can't tell me the ego-card or his base review, where he calls this story 'unreadable' in the first sentence, is respectful to me. I'm human and write this story while working full-time, I won't be unbiased.

Real talk, I kinda wanted to make him an immortal tank... He got the base skills for it

BRUH

Thank you for pointing that out <3

Play with fire and you get burned...

... Not entirely

It isn't tho?

You won't find a party system or exp.

Thanks man. Yeah, those smut scenes are super whack and make little sense. The worst are the ones where the dude does no foreplay at all and the girl is flooding downstairs already.

And to add to the point of stupidity... yeah, that's what I'm going for. Does the MC feel less powerful, sure. But it is more realistic to make sudden and stupid decisions. I'm trying to balance the foolishness out so that it doesn't become a chore to read. Thanks for the comment btw.

The thing is, Cole is very much divided in how he sees the people in this world. He knows them from a series that barely compares to real life, and he will suffer for it. Just as he did with Naruto he will with Zabuza.

So, for the passive he only has to be in 'contact' with stone or earth. A very general sort of 'contact' is meant here. So even with shoes on, as long as he is on land he can use the passive. For the property changing ability he has to have skin contact with whatever substance he is changing into. I'll probably make Cole run around with flasks of useful substances he can use. For the late-game, the idea was for him to acquire filings of legendary weapons or sealing tools to attain their properties.

Imma keep it real wit'chu. Kushina was kinda done dirty by the series... (All women in general *cough* *cough*) I don't think I can rectify that without giving Cole a reincarnation ability, and I certainly won't do that. But now onto the point why she isn't in the title, it's just not something that is title worthy, sadly. Konohamaru would also just be the Grandson of the Fourth Hokage and not the Grandson of Hiruzen's deceased wife.

So, I'm gonna take it down in the next hour or so if you can't write more than just a dot.

Could you explain your review? Else I will take it down.

Okey-dokey..................................

He has a hero-complex and is generally a happy-go-lucky guy, it just hasn't sunk in how weak he truly is. The POV issue... yeah, I know. I have written other fics and used first POV for the MC and third POV for others, but I read through other novels that managed to keep at one perspective and wanted to try it as well. I don't know if at this point going for a first person perspective would be a good call. Thanks for the comments ;)

The point still stands that it is absolutely normal to end a chapter at one point and start at another. Also, what is a fact, is that I do not leave one chapter disconnected from the one before it, as you are implying. And don't play the ego-card my dude, that's not a good look.

I'm looking at a picture of him and... he got a whiskers-esque mustache *.*