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I write this novel just to see if maybe I can make writting a side job and still enjoy what I do.

2019-09-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    still thé sale mistake with thé she/her, trying re-reading After translating and Ask yourself if it's feel normal

    Ch 8 Lily (2)
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    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    ahahaha, thats's some simple minded people its's refreshing Reading those type lf character, Hope she get Time to develop her character

    If before when she saw the man she just liked him, but now she fell in love. At the thought of love at first sight she cried harder, not out of sadness but happiness.
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    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    **she /her

    Probably because he was annoyed because his hand was bitten, the person slapped him hard.
    altalt
    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    TFTC, This Time it was more fluide, keep the good work

    Ch 6 Lily Demeter
    altalt
    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    still making mistake, the novel seems promising but thé lack of improvement on the "he" and "she" , make it hard top want to keep Reading if its for having a headache while reading

    Ch 5 Apocalypse
    altalt
    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    he**

    After walking for a few minutes she finally arrived near the road, many cars were passing by, kayle tried to find a taxi passing by.
    altalt
    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    her** body

    Seeing how the girl was looking at him, Kyle didn't care and slowly took off the bear fur coat he was wearing, and put it on to cover his body.
    altalt
    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    how Can he be Homeless if he has the house of his parent?, doesn't make sense

    Even though he got the protection money, the money was only enough for food so for a bed, he sometimes slept in a bar or on a park bench. He became homeless.
    altalt
    Damn Apocalypse.
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Commented

    why are you mixing spanish with english?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    a slightly special guy in the apocalypse
    Sci-fi · bart_batle
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc2mth
    Posted

    uhmm seems wish fullfilling, from thé start it WE are alodt

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    Apocalypse: rescue beautiful woman system
    Sci-fi · AvalonEmber
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc4mth
    Replied to IPI

    seriously do you hear even what you're saying yourself sigh

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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
    Fantasy · IPI
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc4mth
    Replied to Shadow_king_393

    its'sa chinese nouvel of course there isn't Logic

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    Zombie Apocalypse: Creation
    Fantasy · IPI
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc6mth
    Commented

    here WE go boys, that's it finally something that looks Real, when you push too much timide people there réalisations IS wonderful and crazy

    It was....almost exhilarating!
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    The Dawn of the New World
    Eastern · Shinigami8671
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Replied to Yuri_is_Ntr

    yeah for sûre you proof how much you can't make an argument without insulting people

    "As weak as I am now, knowledge is power. That would also attract too much attention and the royal family would probably pressure me in handing in all that knowledge to increase the military strength of the kingdom. I need to slowly create a reputation while gaining the trust of the major powers inside the city. Since I'm planning on creating a harem, as might as well start where the best flowers in the kingdom are gathered."
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    God of Lust and Destruction - (Moved to a new link.)
    Fantasy · RiderRo
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Replied to Yuri_is_Ntr

    Lol, here i was trying to have a discussion and all you find to have a débuté is carlingue other dumb sigh, then start talking then

    "As weak as I am now, knowledge is power. That would also attract too much attention and the royal family would probably pressure me in handing in all that knowledge to increase the military strength of the kingdom. I need to slowly create a reputation while gaining the trust of the major powers inside the city. Since I'm planning on creating a harem, as might as well start where the best flowers in the kingdom are gathered."
    altalt
    God of Lust and Destruction - (Moved to a new link.)
    Fantasy · RiderRo
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Replied to Yuri_is_Ntr

    yeah but then tell me do you think rich people when they use a lot of money for trivial thingd do they think it's a lot for them, or it's the poor thinking that

    "As weak as I am now, knowledge is power. That would also attract too much attention and the royal family would probably pressure me in handing in all that knowledge to increase the military strength of the kingdom. I need to slowly create a reputation while gaining the trust of the major powers inside the city. Since I'm planning on creating a harem, as might as well start where the best flowers in the kingdom are gathered."
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    God of Lust and Destruction - (Moved to a new link.)
    Fantasy · RiderRo
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Commented

    i'm disappointed in you Author, to think that this type of skill would pop out twice prove you don't even try to innovate and your plot focus is just wishfulfillment

    - Level 3 Passive Skill scroll: 'Self Contraception.'
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    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Replied to Duke_Asmodeus

    the character building is so shallow, that it doesn't explain why it's excalate so fast, and why she would accept so easily not even trying to stop him and just accepting it

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    Ghoul King's Harem
    Urban · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Commented

    heart to skip* not miss

    Without further ado, the group jumped into the dark hole and the chilly wind blew in their faces, causing their hearts to miss a beat.
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    My Ten Wives and Ten Rings in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · _EverSmile
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  • fegzzxc
    fegzzxc1yr
    Commented

    don't know brother seems like author doesn't even read himself once he finish writting so that's how it is, the book seems good but if it keep going like that don't feel like keeping reading since after that we will to use coins or FP to unlock chapter , with bad grammar that author don't try to arrange

    Seeing this, Nika and Merab withdrew their weapons. Nika hacked at Nika with his butcher knife while Merab knit his bowstring with an arrow, pulling it to the limit, ready to fire at any moment.
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    My Ten Wives and Ten Rings in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · _EverSmile
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