LuckySeven
A pleasure to meetcha! ^^ [Eng/Arb] – [INFP/Gemini] – [Gamer/Artist/Reader/Writer] Likes animanga, taking walks, cycling, daydreaming, and cute animals/miniature things! Hope we can get along~☆
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LuckySeven1yrCommentedNow he can give people the middle finger when they disrespect him X'D
"Is my left middle finger moving?!"- LuckySeven1yrCommented
Ooh, great! I really like this story so much. Can't wait for your return. ^^
I'm sorry for the wait but I decided I would give you my absolute best and I guess a little patience is what I'm asking for. This story will not be abandoned but if want to see what ahead I have 50 chapter on Wattpad to hold you over I'm editing the first couple of chapters to match these of course. - LuckySeven1yrCommentedThe oldest gritted his teeth in both anger and frustration. "Obito will be ours, Minato. He'll come crawling back to where he belongs." An idea came to him and he smiled like a mad man. "And I know a way to make that happen."
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Now that feels familiar 🤭 I'm actually happy with this development tho
"I'd like you to train my son, Itachi." - LuckySeven1yrCommented
Wait what? There should still be two or three years left before Naruto's generation are born.
"I think that's the last thing you of all people could say to anyone." Inoichi grew a curious look. "Well except for your son." - LuckySeven1yrCommented
My words exactly.
Holy. Shit. - LuckySeven1yrCommented
I shall thankfully read it! ^^
But that to the wait I had time to write a lengthy chapter so I hope you all enjoy. - LuckySeven1yrCommented
Welp
Minato looked toward the two year old beside him who was pouting slightly as he looked at his empty cup. It was obvious he wanted some more and Minato was willing to oblige. He held up what was left in his cup and offered to Itachi. - LuckySeven1yrCommented
I honestly don't mind much since the story's really good, but it wouldn't hurt to inform you... I think Itachi should be 7-8 years younger than Kakashi. Cause it was said that Kakashi quit ANBU when he was twenty-one, shortly after the Uchiha massacre which happened when Itachi was thirteen years old. So Itachi should be 3-4 years, and Kakashi who is younger than Obito and Rin by 1-2 years would be eleven or so years old. Itachi is older than Sasuke by 5-6 years, and he was holding baby Sasuke during Naruto's birth and the Kyuubi's attack. Kakashi was fourteen and in ANBU, so by then, Itachi was five or six.
"And what have you been up to, Mr. Prodigy? I've heard that you're already able to do the Fireball Jutsu." He said, patting the top of Itachi's head. Even at the very young age of 5, Itachi could already do his clan's rite of passage technique, and on his first try as well. Truly it was remarkable. - LuckySeven1yrCommented
Dude, Kakashi is supposed to be ten and is preparing to take the jounin exams. Obito and Rin should be older than him by a year or two. Sakumo should be dead (he committed seppuku before Kakashi became chunin, so Kakashi would've been five or so). Your timeline is messed up.
"Our Kakashi is five years old now Tsumi. He misses you a lot, I miss you too." - LuckySeven1yrCommented
I thought Sakumo died when Kakashi was 5 years old or so...
Kakashi is 9 years old now, five years older than me. Uncle Sakumo is still alive, he is yet to fail on his mission and commit suicide. If possible I want to stop him from dying. In the future, he could be a good alternative for Danzo. I don't know the necessary details of Uncle Sakumo's death. But in anime, it was two years before the Third Shinobi War that Kakashi started behaving like my high school principal who continued to bitch about rules. So, I still have two years, maybe I should interact more with him. - LuckySeven1yrCommented
I thought Itachi opened his Sharingan when he was four years old after his father brought him to war with him?
Even he himself had not opened his eyes, he did not expect this orphan who was bullied yesterday to have a three tomoe sharingan today, which made Uchiha Itachi confused. - LuckySeven2yrCommented
So that's how cats are born!
After an hour of breaking it I can see already my surrounding. I see that the thing that was obstructing me was a egg. So I came from an egg ah, what am I a chicken? - LuckySeven2yrCommented
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Um, I feel like this has more mistakes than the previous version. Even though it looks interesting I can't get myself to continue, you really need an editor, Mr. Author. I don't mean to be rude, and thank you for writing an interesting story, but I can't read comfortably when I get distracted by all the typos and errors. See y'all around in other novels and happy reading. 👋🏻
While she was doing that, I was left unresponsive. I really didn't know what to do at that moment. When I woke up from my astonishment, I saw that my right hand was caressing her back to calm her down, but it seems she started crying even more as she said things she couldn't understand. - LuckySeven2yrCommented
City of Despair*
Upon entering the City of Desperation, the areas nearby the city entrance was in utter ruin. The city was practically falling apart at the seams. Only buildings that were shells of their former selves as far as the eye could see, their remains were scattered everywhere. - LuckySeven2yrCommented
Little indeed...
"This should be the place. The arrow indicated that it was here." Sun Shuai stared at the cave, his eyes shining. "That's odd, I don't see the little monster." - LuckySeven2yrCommented
Ask your VR system ya doofus. XD
"I don't remember it being so realistic when I played my other games! How did they make this feel so real? Did they use some kind of human sympathetic nervous system technology to do this?" - LuckySeven2yrCommented
Ouch... Dunno how ninjas can do it.
Meng Yang endured the pain. After biting his finger, he squeezed a droplet of blood on the metal ball.