The story is going in a good direction however I would love to see some more details on the character and also about the world. If it's not too wordy then also some little details about the way of training and fight to make it more interesting. Overall, a very good start. And hoping to see some more updates soon. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

WoW man, This is the first-ever story that I read which explained the status so clearly. This is awesome.