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all_is_truth

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2019-09-03 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
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    Wow ok gonna complain a bit.. the author went on a side-tirade with a condescending "noble savage" routine promoting 'morally superior' "tanned skinned" victims and nasty immoral untanned dwellers of civilisation. (cringe) Actually the author promotes this further with even more vomit-inducing one-dimensional tropes. 🤮 .. I can imagine the whole US thang was some inspiration behind this .. saying things such as "the wall is their innate sense of supriority" .. but country folk migrating to big cities for a better life has been a big part of society for centuries. Socio-economic discrimination has been a thing since the dawn of human civilization. Still .. the modern racist trope of "bad light-skinned" vs "noble dark-skinned" is disgusting, insulting and vomit inducing. 😐

    But the fashion of clothing the refugees could buy and their tanned skin contrasted too greatly from those of the stronghold residents.
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    The First Order
    Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    "I'm a world class assassin" Love it ! 👍

    Ch 1 Retirement as an assassin
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    Oh, everyone has the leveling system? 😑

    He also discovered that the world of Lumia has monsters that can give you experience points to level up your character. He put it back on the shelf and saw the history of the Kael Family.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
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     "I am your Guardian! A messenger from the Creator himself. I am with you as you grow and wherever you may go. I report what you do to the Creator. The Creator of Lumia himself. Though you may not see me, I am with you and I will always be there." 
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    Haha! 😄

    He flipped the pages because he couldn't understand a thing from it but he laid down on the floor and continued to read although it was unreadable.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented
    The knife pierced through his heart multiple times, by the woman who he so loved. The woman who's now furiously stabbing him to death. 
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Replied to Roxanne_Woods

    Shh.. it's just brilliant.

    "My child just turned one year old and he can already speak? Since when?" Melvin looked at Erza with his wide eyes and a big smile.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    OMG this is awesomeness! Author, I love your writing style. I was worried earlier on, but now I see I just misunderstood. Glad I kept reading. 👍

     He was killed by his wife. He closed his eyes and let out his last breath. His soul drifted away and he let go of his life. He felt betrayed and his heart was crushed by the fact that his wife murdered him. He wants to cry to the pain but he sipped it in. He wished to restart his life that if fate will make his wish come true; he would live again.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    But did he help her wash the dishes?

    "Honey…" Kael tried to get a hold of her but she stood up and watched as he tried to get up. Jane grabbed her phone and said, "Mission accomplished. Put the money in my bank account, we're done here."
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    I not sure you realize how long it takes to equip combat armor. 👍

     He opened the drawers, grabbed another pistol, put on its silence, and buckled himself up with a magazine belt after he wore a bulletproof vest. He pulled the top of the pistol and a blank bullet was discharged from its exhaust. 
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    If they aren't in a training exercise and the target is a trained combatant, why not just use some grenades? The bullet proof vest won't shield him from an explosion.

    She nodded at him and Kael went towards a room filled with computer screens, which was for surveillance purposes. All sensors triggered by heat and motion. A group of people in red were moving towards the corners of the house. Looking at it, he saw many armed swats break their window and threw tear gas inside. Others were snipers in position.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    How is moving on broken glass quiet? 😐

     He crawled on shards of glass to avoid their red lasers. Moving as quietly as possible towards a picture frame, gripping his pistol. He opened the frame like a window and there sat a night vision goggle and a silencer. He twisted it on the tip of his pistol to attach it and put on his night vision. He continued to move to the bedroom, his wife crouching beside the bed; She was about to attack him but he called upon her name.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    A .45 is pretty powerful for close-quarters (more kick, less accuracy), and the size of the cartrige means less ammo per magazine. 🤔

     "Intruders, the motion sensors must have detected them." He thought, walking towards the kitchen drawers. Pressing the button underneath it, a calibre 45 pistol emerged. Without further ado, he grabbed it and went on to his wife. He turned off the power switch to make it harder for the intruders to see in the dark.
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    Is this going to be sjw cringe? Ok, I saw author's comment.. but will be furious if there's cringe moralizing.

    "Yes, I like it. You're the best, honey." Kael took a sip of the pork tamarind soup. "Let's wash the dish together." 
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    Lumia: Other World
    Fantasy · Mel_Aniv
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    Yeah.. homo sapiens have only been around a short amount of time. I like fantasy.. but yeah..

    Isolated from the passage of time, the cloud of Athelei's existence suddenly flickered as a humanoid-shaped shadow would make its appearance. The images and particles that stretched a few lightyears in size would collapse into this shadow in an instant.
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    Cosmic Curtaincall
    Fantasy · perilousindulgence
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented
    Save them? Or not save them?
    altalt
    The First Order
    Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    F for Xiaosu's victim

    Instantly, the black saber came into contact with the Experimental that pounced at him from the left side. Its body was slashed in half at the waist by the black saber like a knife cutting through hot butter!
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    The First Order
    Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    F

    With a loud boom, the wounded soldier and Experimental were blown away by the explosion. Ren Xiaosu realized that not even the Experimentals could handle the destructive power of a grenade!
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    The First Order
    Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
    Commented

    Using high explosive ordnance in near zero visibility against creatures that can survive heavy calibre weapons, in an area full of unarmored civilians running about. uh.. k

    "Platoons One through Five, get ready to shoot. Platoon Six, be on standby to replace them on the firing line. The wounded soldiers will be responsible for passing along ammo for reloading." Tang Zhou's calm voice echoed in the soldiers' ears. Then he opened up a box on the ground and took out a rocket-propelled grenade launcher.
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    The First Order
    Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter
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  • all_is_truth
    all_is_truth2yr
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    Ren Xiaosu realized someone else might be controlling these Experimentals. They had not yet lost all of their intelligence.
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    The First Order
    Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter
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