Monetization on webnovel is... something else. But tbh, I don't feel cheated when I pay for your chapters, so it doesn't bother me. If it's exposure you're after, you made the good choice since it's logical that webnovel will push novels they can actually make money from.

please don't drop this novel. it's great, it really is.

I will, Ashen one.

It's cool to see characters having believable reactions. Good writting. Masterpiece compared to most book on webnovel.

nice chapter, as always

so it basically is dark soul

The Tower walks ! just like Numidium, were the dwemer on Morgar ?

My opinion so far Your writing is very good. Better that 99% of the books on webnovel. You know how to create tension I think however that it would be nice to have some "relaxed" chapter with character bonding / world building. It's important to let the tension drop a bit from time to time so the next stressful moment can be more impactful.

Probably one of the best book on Webnovel. Avoids every cliché : - No super op plot armor characters - Actual tension in the chapters, - No cringe - Believable characters - Good writing And above all : No harem, no touching your sister, and no rape apology.

Thank you for the chapter. My opinion so far : - Your writing is good, but be wary of repetitions - You should try to focus your story a bit more : I understand that Noah is an average dude, and his first combat was very difficult. But tbh the story is a bit slow to start. That's ok because it obviously is not your average fantasy novel, but 8 chapter to deal with a couple of monsters seems a bit long. - Kudos for exploring the classical lovecraftian themes of cursed inheritance and hidden horrors beyond our understanding. Can't wait for the next chapter and see what his eldritch body refinement did ! He should get tentacles. Tentacles are very useful, and girls love 'em.

nice work so far

as always, good job ! and thanks for the chapter

if you don't want to start a debate, don't insult people. because comparing me and my colleagues to slavers is insulting. My job is to help people free themselves from restraints imposed my mental illness. Not enslave them.

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

I love your work. just sayin' one year of writing the same story is hard, and thank you for going this far. i didn't have some much "fun" reading a web novel since Worm and Pact. Definitely one of the best work on this website. is there a discord somewhere for your novel ? anyway, thanks

The Slaughterhouse 9 transmigrated ?

I'm getting strong morrowind vibes from this novel. Very nice work !

I like your story, it's fun. But you need someone to correct your mistakes, like "Weapon of mass distraction".

:( poor boys.

Go for the balls. They deserve a Darwin Award.