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Oof, well personally I think the starting chapters were all over the place. The Newer chapters were going in a interesting direction with the netherworld, and it seemed like we were getting into the main story after her growth phase. Still don’t see how you plan to incorperate the villaness aspect, it seems more like she is being set up as a hero\god. In general I found It interesting enough to read. It could certainly use some touching up and your english could use some work. Its never a bad thing To take a break and think about your dirwcrion with a story, but I dont’t think you should rework the earlier chapters unless you want to make large changes to the story.
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