CrimsonsSable

Might be a typo but Mangetsuringan is stated to only give five abilities but there are actually seven listed. So I think five should have been seven. Other than that great story so far and I am definitely looking forward to more in the future.

Great chapter, thanks for all of the work you put into these. My suggestion, for the next chapter start it off with the full line. "Bankai: Hitotsu ni Bugendai!!" of translate it "Final Release: Infinity in One!!". After all Bankai is just supposed to be them releasing the final forms of their weapons thus is means final release and so Hitotsu ni Bugendai would be the actual attack so it would flow a bit better. Still absolutely great story though. I am looking forward to more from you in the future.

If you test with your friends ssd and it is still not working it could be the M.2 slot. If that happens you'll have to figure out how to reupdate the bios due to a faulty update. I've heard of something similar happening but couldn't remember for certain, went to google and type the question of "Can a SSD brick the BIOS?" and this answer came up. That's when I remembered a friend had this issue a few years ago but it is so rare that I forgot it. Good luck on getting it fixed and hope everything works out in the end.

Found the answer later, nvm. It was broken down to passive decent and active decent. would have been much better if that was in the question and not explained by the characters though since it causes confusion when read normally.

I know this is really late, but I just started to read this story. Not a major critique or anything, just wanting to verify something. If I'm not mistaken, the first time Thor comes to Earth/Terra/Midgard that we know of is right after he went to Jotunheim and almost caused a war between them and Asgard after which Odin stripped him on his powers and banished him to Earth/Terra/Midgard until he proved himself worthy of his powers once more. If this is the case then now of the answers to the question are correct, the closest would be A, however he didn't exile himself so it wasn't self-imposed. I don't know if this is changed in a future chapter and this is a typo in this one or if you truly mean self-imposed. I really like the story so far however and will continue reading, so I'm looking forward to the future of the story.

I certainly hope this isn't the end. At least not a permanent one. After all he is now God of Reality, and as show he is everywhere and no where at the same time, thus the possibility of alternate realities where he hasn't done a criminal world wipe is there. He could go to other locations meet other main characters even guide them if he wanted to, or he could simply go to Orre and change how it is from a nearly barren desert with a few oasis to a land that truly thrives. As the God of Reality the possibilities as endless now. At the very least Rocket is still a minor issue so them being dealt with is still something he is doing even if the League is trying to do something finally so maybe 2-5 more chapters for the current story. If a continuation happens I'd be happy to read it has been quite enjoyable to read so far. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more from you in the future.

Indeed it was a bit much overall, however if you removed the shadow monarch powers and stuck with just monster hunter stuff, no forced missions or anything like that you could definitely swing the story in a positive way. It would take some work to do so for it, but otherwise it has been enjoyable reading it. I'll look forward to reading other stories by you if they interest me. Keep up the good work. ^,..,^

Thanks for the chapter.

Welcome back. Also depending on which version of Doomsday you are using congratulations on possibly having a almost immortal MC now. After all some Doomsday die and come back to life immune to what killed them in the first place.

I won't lie, I've enjoyed the story so far. I agree with the Beerus knowing thing being a bit off but that can be taken as this being an AU from the original with very little changed and that is the world the character was thrown into so it's fine to me. I also agree that if you want to know if your story is good or bad you should read the story yourself not as the author but as someone who is looking for something to enjoy. If the story seems fine as is, continue if not and only minor things are wrong continue and slowly fix those things, if not but something is really wrong then you could rewrite the story keeping everything similar but changing that thing. It is all up to you really. I will say this as an aside though, constantly repeating the same thing does get a bit stale like with the whole should they fuse thing or how the fusions are feeling, we understand that you are trying to show a deeper side of the characters but it bogs the story down when it is repeated multiple times, once or twice is fine for each fusion then probably only bring it back up when they make progress on the emotional side like saying something like "I use to feel "this way" but after being around so and so and experiencing everything I realized those feeling were really because of "this". It adds character depth, development and progresses the story all at the same time as well as not bogging it down with more than needed. Personally I don't think this needs a rewrite just to slowly work on getting better at certain points. I'll happily continue reading this either way but to me you are doing fine and writing is about learning as you do not being perfect from the beginning.