TheDarkAbyssalLord
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TheDarkAbyssalLord1yrReplied to NeninhoMovies are also a type of literature..
'Even though we're a literature club.'- TheDarkAbyssalLord2yrReplied to ALazyReader
I also thought that he would win.. Because this is a wish fulfillment novel. The character development maybe necessary but it could have been better..
The system made him think he was far beyond his peers. He aimed for the brightest stars, only to achieve the moon. It would have been an accomplishment to anyone else but not him. - TheDarkAbyssalLord2yrCommented
Are you an idiot? It's not a dialogue...
It's Phantom Kid, Mathison! - TheDarkAbyssalLord2yrCommented
What all of you are yapping about? If you don't like what the author is doing don't read it. Criticism isn't needed in a webnovel, only recommendation or advice.
This paragraph has been deleted. - TheDarkAbyssalLord2yrCommented
Just Read it and don't complain. The author is the one who decides what is what. If want your own way then make your own novel...
Strength: 72 - TheDarkAbyssalLord3yrCommented
Of course, his the MC...
"Okay. I should be getting there," nodded Yu Sheng. His journey in cultivation was no easier than that of Ye Futian. - TheDarkAbyssalLord3yrCommented
Then why didn't you make it in the first place..... Is this just to make him weak to strong
"Finally," Gwyn ap Nudd continued, ignoring my despair and anguish, "you will be changed. SYSTEM enhanced and reinforced your lineage with Belenos. But It adjusted only the lineage on your Seelie mother's side. Your hubris and arrogance are more reminiscent of your Unseelie Father. So that bloodline will be made whole to act in concert and opposition to the line of Belenos.