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Daoist68907310dCommentedGreater Bully of Major Kneeling
The two bullies were now bullied themselves by an even greater bully.- Daoist68907312dCommented
any other guilds*
It was a big risk, but Elliot has to risk everything he had. After all, there wasn't any more guild that would want him in. - Daoist68907325dReplied to CosmicAutarch
dumbass, the gloves were perfectly fine. the kid with prejudices used as mentioned, a lethal spell in public and despite villin trying to save the gloves he paid for he jad no way of knowing he wouldve nearly caused someone to die. dude isnt at fault for protecting his assets by racist assholes
Even though Villin knew his logic was somewhat twisted, he chose to ignore it. In the future, people would die because of him, even though he wasn't sure he fully understood what this meant yet, he knew it was true. - Daoist68907326dReplied to squirtle14
Right boys, time to fire up the propane sprayer
Immersed Jade was undoubtedly a cute noob. Starting from when she first entered the dungeon, she kept silent, carefully listened to directions, and earnestly carried them out. Although she still made beginner mistakes, she always apologized for them. As a result, everyone also didn't feel too good pointing out her faults. When Immersed Jade made mistakes, Seven Fields and the others were even more nervous than her. They were afraid that brother expert would feel impatient because of this! A lot of experts didn't have much patience towards these inexperienced newbies. - Daoist68907326dReplied to Kohii
That doesnt make it good.
" Yes, He must be trying to impersonate us gamers for some evil plot of his." - Daoist68907327dCommented
Thinking about it, isnt it likely that the kid inhabiting the body before died as well and it was just rebuilt to house our villin instead of a new one being made?
"I heard it's your birthday today so I got you a present, I hope you like it." - Daoist68907329dReplied to Dweia
Well, right, but they didnt tell him they OWN the core, and them knowimg why he's getting it seems like it would change things, they seemed to (to an extent) have his best interests in mind in the past... and having the keeper you've been helping to get stronger lose his identity and mind seems like a bad thing
Ch 117 Clash of Purple and Crimson - Daoist68907329dCommentedCh 117 Clash of Purple and Crimson
- Daoist6890731mthReplied to Dweia
True, but that person also had tried to, as the being said, treacherously kill him after he had already surrendered.... but, i suppose its a good moment to emphasise his empathy
I collapsed on the ground. I felt sick to my very soul. A person had just died in front of me. A player! A real human! A human! - Daoist6890731mthCommentedCh 53 53 - Price
- Daoist6890731mthCommented
tl;dr: Gimmie Gimmie
"A thief who steals from other thieves deserves a hundred years of forgiveness." This was a saying Noah once heard from someone. Before, it didn't make much sense in his head, but now looking at the pair of daggers on the boss's waist, Noah finally understood the meaning of the saying. - Daoist6890731mthReplied to ranger314
seconded for the Kiss part, not for the gift part, im too much of a cheapskate. sorry..
Count Lark hadn't changed much since the last time Lith had seen him in person. He was in his late fifties, around 1,83 meters (6') tall with a thin build, that made him appear even taller. - Daoist6890731mthCommented
Honestly being able to find dying creatures sounds pretty powerful for collecting souls, a little surprised he didn't pick up on that but considering his situation I suppose his mind isn't entirely focused on creativity or optimizing his growth.. :p
New skills also had been unlocked. I read through the skills and their descriptions and finally decided on levelling up Fallen Grace and picking up a single new skill. I didn't need a skill to locate dying creatures or a skill to heal more than one person – I was alone. - Daoist6890731mthCommented
While its frustrating, its also fair. He has his own agenda and I doubt he would give up something he's spent his life working on for a dude he's known for like, a handful of days and seen on a couple of occasions, especially when he isnt even going to directly harm him. He isnt aware of arthurs situation with his dad as well:/
Arthur was someone who saved him, someone Yuran looked at like a little brother. But if he needed to betray him to get what he wants, then he would. - Daoist6890731mthCommented
goodest of boys
As he looked at the wolf and back at the rabbit, he saw that the wolf was looking at him and pointing with its paw toward the rabbit. Arthur was confused but he understood that it was offering him food. With hunger overtaking him, Arthur took out his water and cleaned the roasted rabbit before starting to 'wolf' the rabbit down. A familiar scene took place where a wounded man ate while a wolf stared at him. - Daoist6890731mthCommentedCh 115 The dark of night
- Daoist6890731mthCommentedCh 139 Half A Century
- Daoist6890731mthPosted
I'm not gonna lie. If this novel wants to continue in english it DESPERATELY needs an editor, or someone fluent in the language if the author is not... in the first chapter alone I found it became difficult to continue reading as the flow of the story kept getting cut up by the way it was written, and it took me some time to try to follow what the author was trying to convey. If the story gets some edits into it to smooth itself out, I'll give it a more serious chance but for right now I cant TRULY recommend it in good faith, regardless of if its later chapters have improved. First impressions are important and having a first chapter like this one doesnt leave a good one! The review is subject to change at such a time as the author reviews their earlier work in the story!
