Greater Bully of Major Kneeling
any other guilds*
dumbass, the gloves were perfectly fine. the kid with prejudices used as mentioned, a lethal spell in public and despite villin trying to save the gloves he paid for he jad no way of knowing he wouldve nearly caused someone to die. dude isnt at fault for protecting his assets by racist assholes
Right boys, time to fire up the propane sprayer
That doesnt make it good.
Thinking about it, isnt it likely that the kid inhabiting the body before died as well and it was just rebuilt to house our villin instead of a new one being made?
Well, right, but they didnt tell him they OWN the core, and them knowimg why he's getting it seems like it would change things, they seemed to (to an extent) have his best interests in mind in the past... and having the keeper you've been helping to get stronger lose his identity and mind seems like a bad thing
True, but that person also had tried to, as the being said, treacherously kill him after he had already surrendered.... but, i suppose its a good moment to emphasise his empathy
tl;dr: Gimmie Gimmie
seconded for the Kiss part, not for the gift part, im too much of a cheapskate. sorry..
Honestly being able to find dying creatures sounds pretty powerful for collecting souls, a little surprised he didn't pick up on that but considering his situation I suppose his mind isn't entirely focused on creativity or optimizing his growth.. :p
While its frustrating, its also fair. He has his own agenda and I doubt he would give up something he's spent his life working on for a dude he's known for like, a handful of days and seen on a couple of occasions, especially when he isnt even going to directly harm him. He isnt aware of arthurs situation with his dad as well:/
goodest of boys
I'm not gonna lie. If this novel wants to continue in english it DESPERATELY needs an editor, or someone fluent in the language if the author is not... in the first chapter alone I found it became difficult to continue reading as the flow of the story kept getting cut up by the way it was written, and it took me some time to try to follow what the author was trying to convey. If the story gets some edits into it to smooth itself out, I'll give it a more serious chance but for right now I cant TRULY recommend it in good faith, regardless of if its later chapters have improved. First impressions are important and having a first chapter like this one doesnt leave a good one! The review is subject to change at such a time as the author reviews their earlier work in the story!