No worries man by far a clean and clearer writer then most so keep up the good work. Anyways Imma go have a drink see ya!

switch the I and r of first

At first I was liking it until I realized your one of the people whom beg for power stones, even putting you whole story on hold just to beg for them, that's not my only grievance though because another is you terrible non-chapter to chapter ratio, and last but not least this is not a hate comment its simply me expressing my annoyance at you writing practices, BUT other then that you writing so far is solid and the story is good.

This is cool so far but there is still the use of physical money in cyberpunk there called eurodollors or something similar to that, so his pickpocket skills could still be of use,before you say but why would there be any it's because there are some in cyberpunk that refuse to have cybernetics like the monks near the docks of Watson.

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Ok but don't just always give them to me there are plenty of writers who deserve them!

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lol you don't need to give me them :)

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not yet since he's working in a team but if it just him and another raider then yes