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James_loren8mthCommentedHow does he know all this
Wukong looked at the blond boy and stared at him. This man was also interesting. His most notable moment, which hadn't happened yet, was when he froze all of hell. Sun Wukong burst into laughter the first time he witnessed it. Although this boy's ice powers had a slow start, and some may argue that he wasted the ability in his younger years, seeing as how he's an Omega-level mutant, he does learn the full extent of his powers. In due time.- James_loren8mthCommented
didn’t he just say he’ d do this missions alone
"So you will come with me?" I asked - James_loren8mthCommented
Month*
'Oh boy, how wrong was I. It almost took a mouth to just spit out the ball. Just imagine how long it took to teach the curse how to store itself' - James_loren8mthCommented
and also do not due
"A fifteen-year-old fighting like an experienced sorcerer. This must've been your first time facing a curse user to get used to this sensation. There's a lot more of us in the shadow waiting for an opportunity to be free & due what we desire." He declared collapsing on his back. - James_loren8mthCommented
Could’ve worded that a lot better too for example “this must’ve been your first time fighting a curse user, we’ll get used to it because …ect”
"A fifteen-year-old fighting like an experienced sorcerer. This must've been your first time facing a curse user to get used to this sensation. There's a lot more of us in the shadow waiting for an opportunity to be free & due what we desire." He declared collapsing on his back. - James_loren8mthCommented
Could’ve worded that better like “I’m going to kill you and that little girl to send a msg…ect…” obviously write msg properly but yh
"Because they are weak & because it's fun. Looking at their face before they die provides me enjoyment. But now it's about to be Twenty - three people." He said as he released his bloodlust. "You & that little girl I will kill. Just to send a little warning to jujutsu high that I'm not a sorcerer who a bunch of brats can take care of." The sorcerer answered. - James_loren8mthCommented
When using this - make sure it’s connected for example ‘kami-sama’ makes it smooth and if it’s it can come off as stumbling on your word or hesitating
"I'll be fine Kamo - Kun there's a low chance of a curse getting me from the sky. You be safe as well even though I know you be ok. You are grade 2 after all." Momo says as she started flying in the air. - James_loren8mthCommented
You should’ve put the comma between “i see” and “continue” and this was meant for the other chapter but you’ve put ‘two’ instead of ‘too’ twice last chapter apart from that you’re improving just need to be more careful wit h grammar and punctuality you’re writing will get better over time so don’ rush it
"I see continue, what's the problem?" Principal Gakuganji requested stroking his beard. - James_loren9mthReplied to NappyAfro
I swear you Batman meatriders will do anything but fault him
I stop that thought as fast as it came. That was the Jason part of me thinking, but I can't let that get out of control. I don't want to be some rich guys little sidekick again. He obviously couldn't even save us when we needed him. - James_loren9mthReplied to James_loren
isnt*
Suspicion. Discomfort. He didn't know Cyclops, but there was something more to him when he watched. Bronte could almost feel it radiating from the cold and calculating man as he was ushered out of the training area by Laura and the others. - James_loren9mthCommented
bro can’ t there be one fanfic were Cyclopes is portrayed as this ultimate asshole
Suspicion. Discomfort. He didn't know Cyclops, but there was something more to him when he watched. Bronte could almost feel it radiating from the cold and calculating man as he was ushered out of the training area by Laura and the others. - James_loren1yrReplied to cheeki_breeki
so that some how gives him to right to go around playing super hero while keeping ppl like redhood under his hypocrisy rule while he lets countless of innocent lives be lost daily, yep you Batman fans have all the logic in the world
Fucking Gotham villains. He never did understand why Batman never put any of them down. - James_loren1yrCommented
you should probably take notes from fate/defiance if you want to right a better fate fan fic and it would be pretty cool if it was about an assassin (not related to Hassan) with no real Percs expect natural talent,hard work,resourcefulness ect because ppl are really tired of mcs with op gifts given to them
So let me toss my ramblings aside to confirm something with some readers, this story is dropped. I have one hundred percent lost interest in writing it. But I haven't lost interest in writing something else about fate. This time I am going to have just one character and not fumble around trying to write stories about different characters. - James_loren1yrReplied to TooLazyToWork
I’d rather not take advice from an uneducated waste of sperm with daddy issues 👍
In Manhattan, next to the towering building, an old black man looked at the prompt given by the system and muttered to himself. - James_loren1yrReplied to Niroloc_X
don’t disrespect my boy issei like that
No matter how enticing the sight was, Basara was no helpless pervert that would try to cop a feel while abusing the trust that was put in him. Only a lowlife would act in such a hateful manner. - James_loren1yrCommented
YES
Fuck getting a system - James_loren1yrCommentedCh 4 The Ancestral Forest (Part 1)
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does this count as black face
In Manhattan, next to the towering building, an old black man looked at the prompt given by the system and muttered to himself. - James_loren1yrCommented
WHASSUPP
" Okay, let's step outside." I told the man. I placed my food down and pointed to the door. - James_loren1yrCommented
wow wow this needs to stop author otherwise me and the mc are going to have some problems
" He's not the best, but he's okay. We just like the main actress." The stepfords spoke.