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Akbar_Raaz14hCommentedThe arc in itself feels ok but if you see the journey of Edward and also his character development, i feel that this arc feels like a ditch... not enough action( I don't just mean fights), much of these chapters feel like fillers. And the end boss too feels to vague and Edward feels not paranoid or prepared for some fight like he is up for any challenge, which feels like he is letting it go a little. unlike what i expect from a character like him. ps: take this with a pinch of salt. i love your novel.
Many of you need to stop telling me you don't like this arc without giving me valid reasons or criticism; it's annoying to read these comments. So, either stalk chapters and wait until this world is finished or stop reading altogether.- Akbar_Raaz1dCommented
I'll give you 5 star review just for this paragraph
He never thought this day would 'COME', but... 'I truly sympathize with all you white little snakes out there. Such cutthroat competition that even Asians would cower in fear. So many variables... Truly, the birth of a child is nothing less than a miracle!' - Akbar_Raaz1dCommented
some1 got the sas
... How do you even have this at level 1 but taunt that high? - Akbar_Raaz1dCommented
hmm putin asking for your no.
YOU CAN BUILD THE NUKE - Akbar_Raaz1dCommented
a "certain area"... hmmm wht might it be
Effect: Boost the damage by 1% when hitting a certain area of enemies. - Akbar_Raaz3dReplied to WONDAWAE'Hail the god of paranoia, Bruce Wayne.'
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hmmm ... quite a different take i see
At the same time, I was happy, excited and a little nervous. I was about to meet one of my favourite characters in real life. I quickly straightened myself and followed Matron. - Akbar_Raaz5dReplied to SURPASSEDEMPEROR
+1
For the people saying this arc feels like a cultivation sect. The entire Onmyou System was inspired by the anime Tokyo Ravens, with me adding a few spins to it based on the Black Clover's lore. - Akbar_Raaz6dCommented
faster than the update speed i hope
FictionOnlyReader - Author - Things are going to move very fast now. Very fast. - Akbar_Raaz6dCommented
i doubt it
She caught a vial filled with clear liquid. He instructed her, "That's a special liquid that can heal you. Put it on your face," ~Except that's Moony's saliva,~ - Akbar_Raaz6dCommented
so know to live longer... mc will spit in her mouth
She didn't feel it, the dark mark. She took a glance at Hector again, who grinned this time. Her mind felt much free at this instant as if a constant pressure was gone, she didn't have to fight the dark desires looming to grow in her mind. She felt weaker, but also fresher. The dark presence that kept talking to her conscious, calling her towards itself, enticing supreme power, it was all gone. - Akbar_Raaz7dReplied to Argent_Evergarden1
ahh... i see god is allowed
Heck, there were Japanese commanders in a few aircraft, going crazy, questing themselves, "WHO DOES HAND TO HAND COMBAT AGAINST AN AIR RAID?" - Akbar_Raaz7dCommented
my Indian gene be kicking in
He jumped down. Many ran up to the edge to see him fall in the water with a splash, however, a fast Curtiss P-40 Tomahawk fighter zoomed by and Hector landed on it. Everyone saw with horror as Hector stayed on top of it and the fighter gained altitude. - Akbar_Raaz9dCommentedCh 321 Land of the Sun
- Akbar_Raaz11dReplied to Kuuhaku_0801
detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH - Akbar_Raaz11dPosted
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"I know! But Killian used it for weapons! He wants to be a human torch for god's sake! Please! I promise, you can cut my salary for a few years and I'd still work for you, but please, help me get out of this mess…" - Akbar_Raaz17dCommented
its alright theirs still the knb fic
FictionOnlyReader - Author - Huh. . . I just realized the story is about to end. . .
