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Akbar_Raaz

Akbar_Raaz

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2019-08-28 JoinedIndia
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz14h
    Commented

    The arc in itself feels ok but if you see the journey of Edward and also his character development, i feel that this arc feels like a ditch... not enough action( I don't just mean fights), much of these chapters feel like fillers. And the end boss too feels to vague and Edward feels not paranoid or prepared for some fight like he is up for any challenge, which feels like he is letting it go a little. unlike what i expect from a character like him. ps: take this with a pinch of salt. i love your novel.

    Many of you need to stop telling me you don't like this arc without giving me valid reasons or criticism; it's annoying to read these comments. So, either stalk chapters and wait until this world is finished or stop reading altogether.
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    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz1d
    Commented

    I'll give you 5 star review just for this paragraph

    He never thought this day would 'COME', but... 'I truly sympathize with all you white little snakes out there. Such cutthroat competition that even Asians would cower in fear. So many variables... Truly, the birth of a child is nothing less than a miracle!'
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    I Became The Pope, Now What?
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz1d
    Commented

    some1 got the sas

    ... How do you even have this at level 1 but taunt that high?
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    Survival of a Loner MARVEL
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz1d
    Commented

    hmm putin asking for your no.

    YOU CAN BUILD THE NUKE
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    Survival of a Loner MARVEL
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz1d
    Commented

    a "certain area"... hmmm wht might it be

    Effect: Boost the damage by 1% when hitting a certain area of enemies.
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    Survival of a Loner MARVEL
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz3d
    Posted

    beta mc ......beta mc .............beta mc ..........beta beta mc .............beta mc .... .............beta mc .............beta mc ....beta mc .............beta mc ....

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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz3d
    Replied to WONDAWAE
    'Hail the god of paranoia, Bruce Wayne.'
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    A Crazy Journey Through Fiction
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz4d
    Commented

    hmmm ... quite a different take i see

    At the same time, I was happy, excited and a little nervous. I was about to meet one of my favourite characters in real life. I quickly straightened myself and followed Matron.
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    Hp: The Outcast
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz5d
    Replied to SURPASSEDEMPEROR

    +1

    For the people saying this arc feels like a cultivation sect. The entire Onmyou System was inspired by the anime Tokyo Ravens, with me adding a few spins to it based on the Black Clover's lore.
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    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz6d
    Commented

    faster than the update speed i hope

    FictionOnlyReader - Author - Things are going to move very fast now. Very fast.
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    HP: A Magical Journey
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz6d
    Commented

    i doubt it

    She caught a vial filled with clear liquid. He instructed her, "That's a special liquid that can heal you. Put it on your face," ~Except that's Moony's saliva,~
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    Marvel: Mr. President
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz6d
    Commented

    so know to live longer... mc will spit in her mouth

    She didn't feel it, the dark mark. She took a glance at Hector again, who grinned this time. Her mind felt much free at this instant as if a constant pressure was gone, she didn't have to fight the dark desires looming to grow in her mind. She felt weaker, but also fresher. The dark presence that kept talking to her conscious, calling her towards itself, enticing supreme power, it was all gone.
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz7d
    Replied to Argent_Evergarden1

    ahh... i see god is allowed

    Heck, there were Japanese commanders in a few aircraft, going crazy, questing themselves, "WHO DOES HAND TO HAND COMBAT AGAINST AN AIR RAID?"
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz7d
    Commented

    my Indian gene be kicking in

    He jumped down. Many ran up to the edge to see him fall in the water with a splash, however, a fast Curtiss P-40 Tomahawk fighter zoomed by and Hector landed on it. Everyone saw with horror as Hector stayed on top of it and the fighter gained altitude.
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz9d
    Commented

    Dude how many more chapter's of black clover.

    Ch 321 Land of the Sun
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    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz10d
    Posted

    Its good keep going... just this one is not for ne ... all the best.... .... . ................................. .................................................................

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    MCU: Skull and Bones
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz11d
    Replied to Kuuhaku_0801

    Oh are you sure...

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    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz11d
    Posted

    Bro u doing a fab job... just go at it ... Just this story is not for me ... best of luck..............................................................................................................................................................................................................

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    Harry Potter and House Atreides
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz16d
    Commented

    😑

    "I know! But Killian used it for weapons! He wants to be a human torch for god's sake! Please! I promise, you can cut my salary for a few years and I'd still work for you, but please, help me get out of this mess…"
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    Marvel: Breezing Through History as an Eternal
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  • Akbar_Raaz
    Akbar_Raaz17d
    Commented

    its alright theirs still the knb fic

    FictionOnlyReader - Author - Huh. . . I just realized the story is about to end. . .
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    HP: A Magical Journey
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