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I think I’m getting battle fatigue. There are so many avenues for improvement yet this author like many others chooses constant battles. What’s the poi of the other attributes if they don’t get used? What about the family business? With the MC’s other skills there are other dimensions of the story that are basically ignored.
So is this the plan for the next few chapters? The chapter start by reintroducing a group and the group struggles until the MC saves them. Then everyone is shocked and amazed because the MC is back.This has already happened 4 times in the last 10 chapters. It might be time to move the story along. I think we get the idea
This story is just Slammed Together With no Planning. Needs A complete rewrite
When speaking directly to a Royal person you address them as “Your majesty”, “your highness”, “your grace” etc. When speaking about them to another party you would say, “his or her majesty” and so on.