I dont know . there are so many ideas inside my mind but I cannot Express even one percent because I dont seem to have any talent for writing books.

it simply means that all the jutsu except clone one were reward from system quests . well you are right that it may look like my writing style has changed . so I will keep that in mind .

I can do so but then naruto and sasuke wont have any work haha. well I will think of something .

I will try to use this brilliant idea . thank you

well unlike you I'm not well versed in science at all . I'm just writing for fun man . why right a fanfic , if I just want to explain science ? I just used it because the concept seemed interesting . I won't be writing novels here now if I understood science . I will just work in that field . anyway , if you dont like it then you dont have to read it then .. explain science to someone who wants to understand it

well maybe you are right there . but I think that just pure hyuga bloodline is enough

I'm sorry . I dont know much about uchiha fighting style or sword grandmaster . i just chose these because i liked it .

I dont remember much about kaguya's bloodline . thank you for your comment , I will try to use this idea sometime .

I won't have a discussion with you whether minato is strong or not . thia is my fanfic and I just like minato's character and dont give a damn about his strength . besides his strenght is nothing compared to powerhouses in the anime .. well in my opinion though . maybe your opinion is different . you can just your own fanfic and do whatever you want with minato .

Please read properly . Well if mc cant be this much OP or genius then I thought that it wouldn't be that interesting.

thank you . I just like OP mc so I feel some problems while continuing my novels just like you said .

Your idea is great , maybe I will use it for something. Thank you

I'm sorry , I tried to write once with 3rd person POV but couldn't do it properly.. yes, I will try to write more conversations.. thanks for opinion..

Well he is going to live a whole life in one world first so of course his loved ones would die too .. the thing is I dont like immortal stuff .

Well your idea is great but why must you make him fall down in sea..? I just wanted to make things more convenient for him so storage ability is a must . In other worlds like naruto there would be no need for it .

sorry for that ... its been a long time since I watched naruto . so I guess that my understanding was not that great . welll I will just this drop this novel now. thanks for honest remarks though .

yeah you're right . if my vocabulary was that strong then I wouldn't write novels here.. hehehe... sorry and English is not for me . I'm from India and just know some English..

I thought of this setting . it's because every time he is born in new world , it's a new journey . well I will think of some other things too as you are right it's just dumb to just simply start all over again

I think so too . so let's not write it in future that much . simple..

I dont like harem stuff at all . Why carry such a burden if you can **** any girl whenever you want .