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Dao_of_the_Alpha

Dao_of_the_Alpha

Lv10

An avid reader who wishes to become a writer.

2019-08-27 JoinedSouth Africa
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    A good story, interesting plot. Some of the earlier chapters do need to be reexamined by an editor. It would be a good idea to slow down on the number of worlds that you crossover in the fic. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

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