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GIVE MEEEEEE THAT SYSTEM, GIVEEEEEE MEEEEEE! G.I.V.E. M.E.

I can't imagine Jack Ma practicing martial arts. It's just abnormal and weird.

That is so miserable. I actually find it sad rather than funny.

Wrong. Uh, in chapter 29 there is some calamity that would possibly make the world turn back into stone age state. I slowly enjoying the novel, but suddenly it goes into a trend like most other trash novel. That is so abrupt, like why a world calamity?

It should not be just 20 times 🤦🏻‍♂️. Math. M.A.T.H. If the base is 10, and you increase the strength 10 times, it should be 10 x 10. So it should be 100. OMG

I rarely give a review to novels I'd read, but this work is so good. It's refreshing to read a story without inconsistent logic or plot. My only concern is the loan shark group, I have a hunch that it will be the 'hole' in the plot. The reason is that the 'logic' here is somewhat bend as a protection for the MC. With them targeting the MC, how come they don't ransack his house, sell his property, or even his body. That's the rational thing to do instead of just wasting time on him asking for money for a year. The novel is good. If the above-mentioned thing does not become a plot hole, I'm considering to support this novel, wholeheartedly. For the meanwhile I continue appreciating this work, best of luck author. Thanks for your hardwork!

Huh? what's the relation of the first clause to the second one.

the power level is inconsistent. In chapter 3 it was told that "12,000" points is approaching middle level martial master. And here it says "20,000" is equivalent to high level martial master, and suddenly "40,000" is nearly a intermediate martial master. Omg, please be consistent. This details is very important, do you have a note author? Please do.

I'm out. I don't want to say anything bad again. I must just state some problem here. First, the logic and reasoning of characters here are on a level similar to a teen, no problem here except for Arlo. He really acts like a child. I will ask you, how a man become mature for all his training to be strong? This is already a mature character yet he is forcefully turn into a child. Second, without the weapon, is the MC stregth less than 10? And it explicitly told in the previous chapter that having 10 or 11 as foundation is good before temprering. Yet, is was disregarded like the author never wrote it. Third, the curse of attracting trouble is magnified. And the system support it, like it was saying, "You're the MC, shine shine, nobody can kill you. Even the person behind your obesity". And may more problems I would rathere not say. I'm not like this, I expected a lot for the first few chapters, but this expectation is crushed. I don't know now, I expect the author read this. I wish that the quality will become better for the readers that will read this. This novel has a lot of potential. But before that potential is harness, I will drop this. I wish the author a lot of good luck.

The character design is going downhill. Why this Arlo, the suppose brother of his father act like a retard? I see the author trying to make him a funny character. Seriously the novel gets worse and worse. Like the first chapter's are quiet good but the trend goes downhill. I thought I encountered some goody here. My judgement is actually precise as I already read a thousand of light novel for about 10 years now. I hope this retardation will stop, soon.

Didn't the author said that somebody is observing him? If this is a good novel the author should be aware of the consequences of the MC's action. Dead or crippled would be the only result the MC get after doing such foolish action.

A lowkey retardation here. He went from being extra careful to not divulge anything about the system, yet he deliberately show extreme talent suddenly. Typical attention seeker. 🤦🏻‍♂️

huh? why is he publicizing that he is training now?

sorry, I was just SOO impatient 🤦🏻‍♂️

I envy the MC, I wish I have a system even with 0.01% of the effectiveness as of this one. It would be a great help for my Mechanics of Deformable Bodies and Theory of Structures subject. 😵

I can see some traces of True Martial World here. Is that the inspiration of the author?

in the next chapter, he would also tell the future to all heroes he will encounter, drop it now, you all had been warned 👉

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another filler 🤦🏻‍♂️