TheChosenTwo
Lv4
Student and intensive fantasy novel reader
2019-08-20 JoinedGreece
160.1h
of reading
21
Read books
Badges
8Moments
8
TheChosenTwo1yrCommentedReplace John with Khan and it's perfect
"No, Mister Alstair will follow me alone," Khan stated. "If you have something against that, I'll simply make you unable to be with him."- TheChosenTwo1yrPosted
The background is complete nonsense. The way the character speaks is awful and his motives make no sense at all. Everyone else in the world book is apparently dumb and only the mc had a brain. Just terrible writing overall. If you come from his other books like me you will be very disappointed. It's like someone else is writing with his name. Such a big waste of potential it's really sad.
- TheChosenTwo2yrCommented
can someone please explain to me what did leegaain do cause I didn't understand anything.
Then she remembered about Leegaain's manipulation and Fenagar's disregard for the suffering that Kolga had inflicted for centuries on two continents. - TheChosenTwo2yrCommentedCh 25 Evolutionary Development
- TheChosenTwo2yrReplied to John_DoeverCh 1 The Beginning of the End
- TheChosenTwo3yrCommented
Forth Eorlingas!!!
The sound of rumbling echoed in the distance, and from Dave's position he couldn't see clearly. So, he jumped to where Ralph was on the corpse mound and was stunned at the revelation. The incoming troops all held the Shogun's banner, the Shogun from Dave's camp. It was true, what Ralph said, Rohan had come at last.