Godessofluck

The premise of the character is good, and the story is stable. However, I hate the fact that the mc's life is connected to his supposed love interest. I like my characters as an individual, I don't want them connected to something else, because now it's two not one.

TRASH. If you decide to make an OP character, you're supposed to keep it that way. Especially when the character is arrogant and full of himself, you're supposed to not destroy his leverage on that idea, cause once you do, the character won't have a rationale on why they think that in the first place. Yes his logic is that he has a god like quirk and he's a genius. But after he was defeated all that background info and logic becomes pointless, since the character can't back it up. His first loss is acceptable since he was still young and didn't have much experience, however his second loss can't be legitimised, since he had an accumulation of experience, which the author showed, as well as constant emphasis of the character's 'genius' that everyone and himself talk about. He was outsmarted and defeated destroying the character setting of 'genius', 'miracle' and 'godlike abilities', which by the way is the main subject of emphasis throughout the story. It's basically the building block/foundation of the whole story. After that his trash personality the can't be justified.

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LOL the author has humour!😆😆😆

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I'm pretty sure the animals let him catch them.

lol, how fast did you read those?😂😂😂 (lol, this gift is funny, imagine doing that) 😂😂😂

lol, that's not it, he just wants to get rid of any rivals before you can confess

It's so good!!! pls author don't drop pls!! (begging author to not delete the novel) [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

your delusional