amazing to have another novel from you. I love how the writer has mixed the world of science with magic. you do not get to see this often, do you? moreover, it has a totally different but fascinating world building. and the characters are well developed too best of luck, author

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I am replying to your announcement. yes, I personally would like to read more about Erin, his girlfriend. I would prefer to read it all at once at it disturbs me from the main story. so it would be a nice if you post all of Ryan's past at once.

what's wrong with the writing quality? it's the best it can be. I love this writing style personally

k how do I say it😌🍹 I don't comment or review mostly but now I felt like I should just do itm you have a good writing style author I like the way you write fights. clearly only few characters are introduced till now it makes easy for me to not get confused.

hey nice work. .

he's just being attacked by mafia like mad

he will win, Liam will win

it is good

My thoughts...hmmmmm

agree we need a ship

Ava was his? Lmao keep dreaming fellow readers.

k

Lmao let him sit yeah yeah yeah yeah ah a ha ahahah

O fucking shit

LLMAO the tray thing is hillarious.

ok gl

LOL it is nothing, there are worse peeps out there

K/O

ok