More Details please the story feels very rushed, you could for example include the family dynamic in the Targaryens

Let him write and if you have to criticise Anything do it in a constructive way instead of being toxic

The book starts strong with a character that sets himself good and Strategic goals an de ends with him becoming a religious fanatic offerin his firstborns life to R'hollor to save his mother. I can't express the disgust I feel over that decision!!! Wouldn't recommend reading it!

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Option 3 sounds the best

I'll be honest this is one of the best fanfictions/novels I've ever read. Not only is the author original with his plots and story but also manages to include a sense of lighthearteness an witiness that I sorely miss in many other storys on this platform. He also manages to keep his writing quality on a suberb level and doesn't drop in the middle. Lastly is the amount and continuity something rarely seen. Because of all this: props to the author

Cyberpunk as a failed Arasaka experiment

Son of poseidon

First of All I'd like to mention that I'm not trying to bemean you but to just give constructive criticism, now ONWARDS! 1.I liked it better in the old version of this Story when the main character didn't show his face. 2. I liked it better when James showed Shield that he is not to be messed with for example when He jammed the Scanners but despite that good Story and keep it up

I like, continue please and Do your thing😄

While the dwarfes are the best blacksmiths in the galaxy Hephaistos is the god of smithing so he is definitly better than the dwarfes

Hephaistos

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Yea defenetly

Its no problem your health comes first

Thank you for finishing the story it's one of the most well written ones I've ever read

Get better soon

All at once, when you write under stress or without motivation your quality drops

Its nö Problem have a nice Christmas and New Year