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daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to luffy1996Hello Luffy, thanks for your comment. I agree that it won't improve the standard of living, but he wants it for the war. You know, the Middle Ages were rough, and they didn’t care much, but the North takes care of its people It’s documented that a large portion of soldier casualties, especially among the lower ranks, was due to infections after battle because they couldn’t receive immediate care. You know, not treating small cuts or the fact that amputations were done with little hygiene. As for the use of alcohol in history, I believe the first ones were the Mesopotamians and Egyptians, but they used beer yeast. The Romans, on the other hand, used wine. However, wine or vinegar didn’t have a high alcohol content, which is why he's betting on pure alcohol. How he’ll stop them from drinking it... well, that’s another issue. Basically, it’s for the levies. .
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to khalid_musadak
Hi, I apologize, I’m a bit out of practice with English... you know, it’s not my native language. I’ll try to improve it as well, and if you find any mistakes, don’t hesitate to point them out. I usually respond and correct them right away if I’m on the PC.
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to Omes_7736
"Haha, I laughed a lot at your comment... but can you imagine if... nah, just intrusive thoughts."
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to Omes_7736
Sorry, I know nothing about cars, except their price in 2001. I would change it, but I don’t want to lose the comments.
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to nunya_business_34
Thank you for participating and responding. I think the few comments lead to longer chapters, so that’s how they’ll be
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to nunya_business_34
My mistake; I think I wrote the rest of the chapter well xD
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to nunya_business_34
I have returned from the dead.
- daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to DocteurPym
no dont worry
- daniel_vera2 years agoCommented
Yes, I should. I have a few reasons to convince you. First, she is the best fighter of the 100, so it's not good to let her go. Second, her relationship with Bellamy ensures that you have his loyalty, and according to the series, he is the most unstable, so securing him is crucial. Lastly, her relationship with Lincoln is based, in my opinion, on Octavia's self-discovery as a person and a fighter, but she has already had that growth in training, so I don't see much sense in her falling in love with him again.
This chapter has been deleted. - daniel_vera2 years agoReplied to Iseeyou
i dont know I have a few reasons to convince you. First, she is the best fighter of the 100, so it's not good to let her go. Second, her relationship with Bellamy ensures that you have his loyalty, and according to the series, he is the most unstable, so securing him is crucial. Lastly, her relationship with Lincoln is based, in my opinion, on Octavia's self-discovery as a person and a fighter, but she has already had that growth in training, so I don't see much sense in her falling in love with him again.
