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I bet this is sure to be great, exciting and interesting story! CHEERS! AUTHOR!!
AI? Is this AI? This kind of writing style is often found in various stories and works by different authors. It’s fine to use AI, but the AI’s writing style should be adapted to your own writing style so that the text doesn’t come across as flat.
Is this story being abandoned? I hope not! Please! I’m waiting for this story to continue!
Isn’t Tenjin the emperor or leader of that land of ancestors? Did the MC change his name, or is the emperor being talked about not Tenjin?
Paranoid MC?
Just a quick correction... 6.78 billion hours = 1 million years ✘ 8.76 billion hours = 1 million years ✔ I don’t know if my calculation is wrong, but this is what I got from my calculations.
Hmm.. What this? AI?
I'm really disappointed, Yuji shouldn't have joined any familia!
Hah..? Karna is too weak for Black Clover!?
Also, the main character in this fanfiction ate the immortality fruit, right? So how could he die? Why did he die? Why wasn’t that explained? How can an immortal die? It would have been great if the main character in this fanfiction had actually been a native of the One Piece world, rather than a reincarnation, which is just too boring.