the only thing not perfect with this story is the kind of abrupt ending. really fantastic story otherwise.

Story is a lot more flushed out than the other novel/comic with Bai Qingqing.

Soooo home slice is thousands of years old but looks like a child???

Seriously? ...wow I'm really bummed we didn't see the other kids atleast get mates before and didn't even get a resolution really. Disappointed doesn't even begin to cover it. I had such high hopes for this story but I think the longer it got, the more rushed everything seems to have also gotten.

this story has just gotten so bizarre. The last 15 chapters have just annoyed me.

story really went down hill fast. I'm very disappointed in the last 10 chapters.... so much timeskipping.... its like they want to be done as fast as possible and are washing their hands of it.

so abandoning the kids is totally going to make her happy. like... why... also giving Blue pool the baby at this age..... like cmon....

Should have learned after last time kids. hide the evidence!

Or just yeet Curtis.... hes toxic now in more ways than just his behavior now

ofc qing qing almost dies.