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Ahhhh, this was what that review was talking about with this author writing heroines that have had a bad end.

养老婆见多了，第一次见养boss的 Roughly translates to “raising wives seen plenty, first time seeing raising a boss.”

Pacing feels a bit rushed in my opinion. Plot points have very little setup and finish just as fast. Characters are rather underdeveloped to the point if you replaced their names with relevant npc 1, supporting npc 25, and opponent npc 4 it’d make little difference. Personally the world building and interpretation of the Pokémon world is not for me. Pokemon are more like animals rather than intelligent creatures with their own characters. For exampled abandoned Pokémon are brought up and they’re interpreted as similar to abandoned pets, totally helpless and need to be euthanized rather than finding new habitats or forming their own groups. It’s just a personal preference but I don’t like how Pokémon are just hopeless animals that need humans in this fic. Pokemon themselves aren’t developed as characters and show very little personality or individuality. There’s also very little integration of Pokémon into the world. They don’t exist beyond battling and farming. The fic lacks the “this is the Pokémon world where Pokémon are part of everyday life” kind of feel. Another review also said it pretty well with how the audience act like they’ve not used to Pokémon violence. The world building just lacks the charm of Pokémon and is maybe more similar to a random generic brand monster battling franchise.

Found the raw: 精灵模拟：截胡机缘反杀天命女主

Is it just me or has the translation quality suddenly dropped?

I feel like I’ve read this before. Isn’t this “Reincarnation Game (Book 1: Highschool DxD)” by crownborne on fanfiction.net? So is it an upload by the same author or edited or something?

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Is it the giant dragonite?