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That’s such a cop out

I would like to say that guts has really done jack to change anything. He’s used none of his knowledge at all. He’s just a bumbling idiot with a template of Garp. That’s how he’s come off

+1

This quickly became boring after realizing the MC was A Dbag. He’s not even the strongest and he’s made some pretty stupid mistakes. Along with just being a horrible person and father in general for absolutely no reason.

Bro this is such a well done story. Keep up the good work!!

Everything so far is good not much world building yet but it’s a very enjoyable story. keep up the good work

Really enjoy the story and I’m glad that you rebooted it, but why are you just randomly adding op characters. If I wanted to read about that I’d go to another story. I’m here so the MC can trample all over everything. In the end it’s your story keep up the good work.

lol this was so dramatic for no reason.

So is issei act going to be relevant to the story cause if so I’d like to know early so I can dip now.

So far the first chapter was really good hope this has a semi consistent updat schedule. Keep up the good work author 😌