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Ikemen_Lover16hCommented"Secondly, since the engagement is now between Gu Lian and I, then in terms of status, I am Gu Lian's fiancée. In terms of family background, I am the young lady of the Mo Family. Although the Mo Family is not as wealthy as the Gu Family and the Shen Family, it is not inferior to the Zhang Family. Logically speaking, I should sit in the position of the main female guest." Mo Yu changed the direction and looked at Zhang Jing, who was sitting unceremoniously in the main female guest's seat, with a smile.detailCannon-Fodder Female Supporting Character Swaps Bodies with Her Cold HusbandGeneral · Mountain Spring- Ikemen_Lover16hCommentedCh 1 Blurb
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Besides the fact that she's 16 & it's wrong for him to do that. How deeply does this girl sleep? He's kissed her & has his tongue in her mouth! Sleeping like that outdoors in N.Y. is going to either get you kidnapped, raped, robbed or all of the above.
At first, he was just licking. Unsatisfied, he bit and sucked her lips, making sure he was gentle about it, afraid of waking her. But his growing desire melted his reasoning, and he parted her lips with his tongue, exploring the wetness within her mouth. - Ikemen_Lover4dCommented
If she already knew she was going to win, why did she pass out ?
The next thing I knew; I was lying on a bed with an IV infusion, in a room fueled by my mother's crying and howling. - Ikemen_Lover4dCommented
Whoa, what country/state allows a 10 yr old to buy a lottery ticket now a days? I thought most places discouraged underaged gambling.
I bought a ticket with a whopping seventy million prize and stared at it with a blank face until the sun went down. In a daze, I went home and stayed up late to watch the Lotto announcement on TV. - Ikemen_Lover4dCommentedShe forgot about her pits! Wait, how many pits did she make? She had lost count.detailThe Cannon Fodder in the Global Apocalypse Game lives a leisurely lifeFantasy · The_Sweet_Dumpling
- Ikemen_Lover4dCommentedCh 66 The Inseparable triad of Sky City (2)
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The story is really interesting and I'm hooked. The writing & grammar is done well with a few exceptions here & there. Author, please stop using the word "prolly" instead of "probably" which is grammatically better, prolly sounds too much like slang. Also you have Aiden graping her instead of raping or groping, I'm not 100% sure which you meant. But I couldn't help smiling picturing Aiden forcing grapes on her. 😂 Your writing is really good & with a few grammatical & typo corrections I believe your story will be even better, especially if you enter it into any of the writing contests here or elsewhere if your not already contracted here. I'm excited to read more.
- Ikemen_Lover6dCommentedCh 62 Alexa's fury
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Dear author do you mean raped instead of graped?
'There's no justification for what he did to Alexa. He knocked her out and repeatedly graped her! The effect from the aphrodisiac must have worn out before bringing her back home, so why must he grape her while she was sleeping?!' - Ikemen_Lover6dCommented
Prolly? What/who is that? I've never seen that word before, but I've seen it a few times in this book.
Prolly hearing the sound of more than one person approaching, Renren glanced up and in that moment, chopped off the black rose. - Ikemen_Lover9dPosted
The art start off ok, then gets really bad. The story is ok. The fl is supposed to be a genius but she's an idiot. She does/says stupid naive things, always puts herself in danger. When she'she's not mouthing off to someone, she's getting molested or kidnapped by someone. The ml & secondary guy are both slutty as*holes who are contantly sleeping with different women before getting rid of them & moving on to the next girl.The second guy is her ex who cheated on her CONSTANTLY! He even told he she could still ve his girlfriend if she accepted his mistresses. Then he gets mad when he thinks she is sleeping with someone else. Really?? I can't understand the comics and novels that make women out to be trash if they aren't pure as snow but the men get to f*ck around as much as they want.
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No, not Snake! I liked him. 😭
He had also died with Fuji. - Ikemen_Lover10dCommented
I love how dad's room turned into Changyu"s room.
"Am I the only one supposed to live in the house? It's for all of us. Even though they have fixed the elevator here, this place is still too small and I am sure pretty Aunt is very uncomfortable with you sleeping in her room every night" - Ikemen_Lover11dCommented
She's nuts.
She could only conclude that Sara had bewitched her son. And it was too bad that it was only her that could clearly see it. - Ikemen_Lover11dCommented
Wait, are they done talking? She didn't tell him about Fuji's sister yet,
He reluctantly left the room to another room that looked like an office and checked his mail with the computer. - Ikemen_Lover11dCommented
What? This paragraph is confusing. What does it mean "if people knew he worded an amateur"?
Although he was the boss, it would be bad for his name if people knew he worded an amateur.