Gorgeous as always, although I thought that someone from the quartet would die.

Stay, of course. There is also Toph.

Thank you, it was interesting for me to read about Hephaestus, I waited a long time. Yes, and its development was exactly as I imagined it. There was no stupid "oh! He is an unusual blacksmith! I take you down the aisle!"

And I was hoping they kissed...

Tohka is ignorant as always, she should ask to be eaten, not the other way around.

Thanks for the answer. And since there could be additional storylines, how do you feel about adding a couple of moments from the encore series? Some of them were quite interesting, plus it would be nice to see Yuki and Miku's musical confrontation both as a spirit and as a person (Yuki sings pretty well, right?). Well, since Kurumi is a Hero, then there should be a "Villain" who will endanger the world? It's just that in the original it's difficult for me to perceive Mio like that, and we have a whole neighboring world that is inhabited by quasi-spirits, doomed souls in a dying world. It would be interesting to see the story with them and the new addition to the Hestia family. And saving dying worlds, isn't that the Champion's job?

I read it all at once and I want more. And judging by the author's comments, the whole plot is already thought out, right? Is it pointless for us to offer our ideas?

Did Yuuki kill Shido? Or devoured it? I had a strong feeling that all the spirits would go to the harem. And so, I vote for 18+, especially with Toka, Tenka, Miku and Mio.

I was already afraid that chapter 18+ would begin. Tohka is good precisely because we saw her entire path of development and maturation, and therefore depriving her of this ... It will simply deprive her of her individuality. And I like everything there. I'm waiting for the reaction of Mio, Kotori, Origami, Ast, Dem and Toki herself to this event.

And reflecting on Mio's thoughts at the end, one can timidly assume that Mio herself is pretty good about GG. Still, there were no such aggressive actions towards Shido in the canon (only Kurumi stood out), and therefore this situation is only with GG. Well, the lack of her reaction can be thrown off on acting, after all, she has been playing almost without an emotional and initiative vegetable for years ... 30?

Judging by the reaction with Toka (and most likely Tenka, I’m generally surprised that she didn’t go into inversion;)) GG will be pretty good here, not like a manipulator in God Eater, closer to what we saw with Inori (I like it much more). I would also like to see the interaction between GG and Mio (I really like her, and this is a plot-forming character). I felt very sorry for her, I understood her motives and empathized with her, I would like a happy ending for her. And did Shido appear in this story? If Mio knows GG, then she spent a lot of time with him, which greatly reduces the chances of Shido's birth, because there was only time for this communication from the moment Mio herself was born.

I am so glad that Basara has acquired the penetration skill. now he can be called a real man.

This story is about two men from the Uchiha clan, Itachi Uchiha and Sasuke Uchiha, who are reborn as Kuroka Tojo and Koneko Tojo, and their adventures... Well, that's not the scenario.

I liked the fanfiction. I also liked the main character, in general, I consider Basara Issei a healthy person. I can empathize with him, I want to empathize with him, because he never did any kind of fierce game at all, he did everything with the expectation of results and success. Basara was also someone who could take matters into his own hands, I feel that too. The contract of the master and the servant was also played well here, in which I did not really understand why it was used so little, but I have no questions here. Analysis of the emotional and mental state of the characters is here. I especially liked the way Asia was treated here. It was treated, because she returned to normal due to shock therapy, emotional pressure, her own feelings and desires. There are few places I have seen so carefully and competently worked with her. Well, the last. GG powers. I don’t really understand the logic of “control” of the pedigree, because he cannot seal and not use the blood. He must be stupidly stronger by a couple of orders of magnitude of ordinary people (exorcists), and other young Devils (Rias, Sona and their peers), since the last ones were not shown the levels of high-class Devils. Also, GG was used the magic of gravity, which means the adoption of this force. Another strange moment lies in Ddraig. After experiencing a monstrous emotional upheaval, Basara had to awaken a balance breaker (unexpected or abyss type, but he had to). I repeat. I see it that way. Basara in the canon did not use magic as a demon, god or dragon (I have not read anime, light novel), so I somehow believed in his tricks. Here he uses them, but for some reason he himself is weak. And I will tell my opinion on the future serious battles of GG. Subconsciously not using your power (as it was in canon) and taking a minimum (as here) are two different things. In the first case, it's just a strong guy, and in the second case, we have a tank that shoots not with the main weapon, but with a machine gun. In the second case, it is impossible to defeat him from the same machine gun, another tank is needed here. I hope you understand what I wrote, because English is not my native language.

I want to see Rongomiada. I want to see Artoria Lancer with him and see the reactions of the others.

It would be interesting to see how he will make angeloids like Ikaros and others. The idea with genetics and the sky faction complements this very well. (from the anime Fallen from Heaven. Angel of Whim) they have a need to serve someone. For GG, this is just a plus.

Origin Spirit or First Spirit, Mio Takamiya from Date A Live. The gist is that she originally possessed all the angels and demon lords that were shown. Plus, she can use her angel to simply erase something from reality, there is an "Eden" angel that loops for some length of time until the result is satisfactory. And it would be interesting to see how Kurumi reacts to her.One can simply say that with spirits and angels, the concentration of spiritual energy played a greater role. The same Tohka, whose Sandalphon somehow managed to hurt her, and then she received a huge boost. It's like Bleach. It's possible to spam with a rampag like Ulquiorra, but it doesn't make sense when the astral robe's spiritual protection won't let that damage through. It is more profitable to reduce all this force to one point. The second character could be Arcueid Brunestud from the Fate universe or Tsukihime. True, in the latter it was greatly curtailed. I'm not sure about the star, but she is strong, stronger than everyone who has already been shown (Deus, and now Yuno were shown very weak even for a planetary being of the wrong scale. Jasmine is the same situation.) the dead apostles in Fate are very strong , even with a weak secret they are powerful, it would take a force capable of destroying a continent or a mainland (I don't remember.) to destroy one. And Arcueid is stronger than him many times over. The third character could be the true Archmage from Trinity Seven. He was shown heavily circumcised. Without his body and even a particle of the Archmage. He 100% owns the last frontiers, because even Sora understood that Lisa used, and she is only a Fragment of the grimoire that the Archmage owns. Yui could erase her opponent from reality with her border, just like Levy. For reference, the Void Archmage destroyed his own world, but Arata remarked that he had no chance at all against the true one. Abyss was not powerful against True. (you can rewrite his character a little if you take him in different time periods and add a chat.

Great chapter. I like it. I think one of those bodies is either Jeanne's body (one of the two) or something very powerful and original. Yes, and I want to quickly see the meeting with Azazel and the battle itself with the reaction of the rest of the world to it, especially to the reaction of the Soma family.

It was refreshing. It was interesting for me to read. I would like to read more about this.

Any thoughts on summoning heroically spirits? What exactly will be?