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MAPS BROTHER MAPS. Put a few maps in the description. We need maps in kingdom building novels. Even though it is the civil enengineer in me speaking.

I am a huge anti hero fan. However this MC is not a strong type. I mean he is just an undiciplined broken piece of shit that blames everything that happened to him to justify whatever he does. Bottom line self victimizer anti hero mc is bad.

Quit trying to humanize the crazy son of a bitch. If you are just forcing something new then you kinda did well. If this is your masterpiece than kill yourself before you hurt those close to you.

I know this is not what anybody can stomach but i love it when the harem members are cunning and have a surprise inside them. Most novels just treat them as trophies.

i won't say much but it is pretty enjoyable. Hope the writer makes his mother a more cunning character. Hope the release is stable. you need about 70 chaps before it climbs the rankings.

it is stupid that he screams his age and uses his real name.