BaserkerK

that's great, it is proof of the effort and time you've put into this story and in that regard I have nothing but compliments. Having said that when I compare the length of the first few chapter's to the more recent one's there is a noticeable difference. My suggestion is to take some additional time when writing and once you have a draft you like, take a moment to ask "Ok, how can I make this even better?" Don't get me wrong, so far the quality of this is great compared to alot of others, and yeah the release pace is fairly slow, however I am fine with that because I can tell you are actually putting in the time to make quality story, without ruining it by trying to rush. For that alone I thank you.

idea for a couple of characters in Anakin's Era, First is literally Adam Jensen from Deus Ex mankind divided though do keep in mind you would have to slightly change some of his abilities for cohesive story. The second one is his AI partner Cortana from Halo who is loyal only to Adam as both her creation and Adam's augments, and augmentation procedure come from the same source. I enjoy the story alot, only regret is the limited chapter releases and that the chapter's seem to be getting smaller

thanks

give him the physical outburst and curved shooting from Wanted or the abilities from assassin's creed, both wold go well with his current capabilities

that's debatable if the other 2 are one piece and Naruto, one could argue that Naruto has as strong if not a stronger potential limit. That said both are currently better than One piece.

correction, men dream of either being one or slaying one it's split 50/50

I won't share it however I have three different name's I would chose depending upon what I was, where I was, and what I would plan to do. So Progenitor Vampire in Westeros and from the looks of it eventually a combat legend? Falls right into the categories for one of my three names. Still not going to share the names. Too much plagiarism going on these days

what's this from? I don't think I have seen this yet

I find your lack of understanding, disturbing. Cad Bane, Han Solo, ect..all could be called the star wars or space version of cowboys. That said I think it is ment more as a descriptor for the readers sake.

I can think of some far more dangerous places to end up. Example: war hammer, halo, ect. Marvel by comparison is great in my opinion