Thank you for reading 🙏

So yeah, I think I can move the story faster now. I kinda feel like I’m ready to do more complex stuff. I’ll also in the next chapter and maybe the one after workout any kinks with the system which I know might seem pointless since the story is still in the beginning but let’s be honest I didn’t do a good job explaining it 😭😭😭

That's actually cool asf, I'm doing weapon research at the moment so any and all ideas are welcomed.

My goal recently is to make the chapters bigger and flow better but I haven't found the right way yet.

Thanks man <3

What I'm changing is that chapters that really didn't need to be separated will be fused with only like certain environmental descriptions added. However, no important information will change.

No, nothing is gonna change like in important information. I refuse to do that as that's completely annoying and unfair. What I'm changing is that chapters that really didn't need to be separated will be fused with only like certain environmental descriptions added. However, no important information will change.

3 or 4 ! That’s it. The fourth depends if I really want to or if it works in the story but definitely 3

My fault i liked and didn’t respond 😭😭😭so one is Artemis, and the next two to three are gonna be decided in a poll i do 💀

I’ll look more into it but you definitely got me hooked on the idea. I’ll still have him obtained and practice will playful cloud but I won’t um do what I said in the earlier comment. So he’ll only have two weapons one unique and Playful Cloud. I think I’ll have the inverted spear of heaven act as a material to create his unique weapon. Be it the one you mentioned or another that works better but I’m going to do some research

Yeah if only 😭😭, I doubt she would have those in stock all Willy nilly

Spoiler warning: Whenever the recruitment is done, Artemis will offer two different contracts, one where there are people who don’t want to go in the dungeon and one where they will solely go to the dungeon. In doing so, she expands and gets more power to play with and with said power she’ll be able to achieve her goals. The goals will be mentioned in the chapter after next. [she’ll need a lot of people to help with these goals ]—just focus on the brackets if you don’t wanna read all that. As for any trusting issues and other worries more will be explained later

Okay, I got ya! Imma read more tonight so gimme a few( like 3-4) hours and I’ll have read it by then. Thanks again ❤️❤️for all the feedback

Thanks for the feedback ❤️❤️

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