GrimMarim
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GrimMarim12dCommentedDont use - . Use " for speech.
- Excellent, I'd expect nothing less from my daughter. You are ready for the ritual," came a commanding voice from the entrance.- GrimMarim1mthCommented
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Katsuki Bakugou; Motherfucker: -200 affection - GrimMarim1mthCommentedCh 15 Announcement
- GrimMarim1mthCommentedCh 14 Chapter 14: Paradise (New)
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This paragraph has been deleted. - GrimMarim2mthReplied to RamzawingCh 28 Chapter 12 (Part 1)
- GrimMarim3mthCommentedCh 14 Chapter 14
- GrimMarim3mthCommentedOne of the "Backer" clan members shared stories of their life and customs as the community members installed the machine, answering my questions. I didn't ask many, mostly about daily life and responsibilities within such families. A child about my age, Vincent, ran around near John, the nomad. Vincent wasn't very sociable and only gave me his initial when I asked his full name. His father just laughed at his son's behavior, calling him by his name, which made him puff up in annoyance. The little conspirator then started questioning me, while others, swearing in various ways, tried to install the machine. Susan saved me from this "interrogation" by asking me to come and help with setting up the device, for which I was grateful.
- GrimMarim3mthCommentedCh 18 Announcement
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A halberd user. Very nice.
This paragraph has been deleted. - GrimMarim4mthCommented
Just like Guts from Berserk
Nothing remains... Huh? Except a pokemon egg? - GrimMarim5mthCommented
That's true but Nala did say Ayana's name.
*GROWL* *GRRRRR* Both of them got defensive, ready for agression, when they realised that he knew their names. After all, if a stranger suddenly comes up to you and know your name, you'll get very defensive. - GrimMarim5mthCommentedCh 9 Chapter 9
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What is it with authors and their twink main characters? Give him a real weapon that won't be useless against dragons.
Neil looked at what was available and chose a bow, a quiver of arrows, and two long daggers. After choosing he walked into the forest and little by little the cheering and chattering of the people became quieter and quieter. - GrimMarim5mthCommented
3 months is quite some time but this is high quality work. I'd consider this the best pokemon fanfiction I've read. A proper amount of world building, done in an organic manner without the massive info dumps you typically see. The characters are well written, although I will say that you may have been slacking a little when it comes to the other male characters. But let's be honest, that's not who we are interested in.
Ch 20 Date? - GrimMarim8mthReplied to malinizgeldiiCh 12 Chapter 9: Agency Situation
- GrimMarim10mthCommentedCh 11 Fairytale