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jaspr2mthCommentedCh 56 Chapter 55 - Understanding the Roots- jaspr2mthCommented
I’m imagining his powers like the barriers in JJK
Concentrating, I easily managed to create a dome-like elliptical shield that covered me completely, which gave me a slight sense of confidence, as I now had a way to defend myself. - jaspr2mthCommented
Is Thors Enchancment like the Lightning Cloak from Naruto?
Each use of Thor's Enhancement left Brontes in excruciating pain, his muscles feeling as though they were being shredded from within. - jaspr2mthCommented
Imagine if he could pour his lightning in the clouds and then multiple lightning bolts hitting every ship. Now that’s a “Lightning Pillar!”
Brontes, perched atop the ship's mast, spread his arms wide, and in an instant, a myriad of lightning bolts erupted from his body. - jaspr2mthCommented
Would be awesome if he could copy Sasuke’s Kirin. While he’s fighting his opponent he would be cooking up Kirin in the sky.
The Rumble-Rumble Fruit's power lay in the swiftness and lethality of lightning. If the attack was fast enough, the opponent would have no chance to resist or defend. His battle with Sakazuki had given him a deeper understanding of his fruit abilities, but it had also exposed his shortcomings. - jaspr3mthCommented
Good stuff, I’m not really to familiar with the original Greek mythology but I don’t think Pallas was ever in line with Hades no? I like that he’s gathering more allies, with all these gods/titans in his corner the more advantage he has and the more powerful the Underoworld is under his banner. Looking forward for more tftc!
As I looked at my new follower, I had to hold back a smile when I saw the disapproving look in Styx'seyes as she gazed at her husband, who was kneeling in front of me. I felt that Pallaswould be in the dog house for the next few days... - jaspr3mthCommented
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Hecate the Queen of Witches: The Daughter of the TitansPerses and Asteria, Hecatewas the TitanGoddess of Magic, The Mist, Crossroads, Necromancy, the Night and Moon. Often depicted as wearing a flowing black gown and surrounded by her Familia, Hecatehas two physical depictions in Ancient times she was depicted carrying twin torches burning with a green hellish flame, whilst having three heads each depicting the morning, noon and night. In modern times Hecateis described as having glowing green eyes that swirled with power, luscious dark hair that barely came to her shoulders. Her face was the vision of a Goddess beauty with alluring pale skin and features described as being ageless. And surrounded with a greenish aura that radiated strength. - jaspr3mthCommented
Ketsuryugan? Or maybe the eye that the purple hair kid has?
'If it is the Byakugan… I would have to replace it.' I thought, praying for such a situation to not occur. The best possible scenario is that it comes from a clan not within the Leaf, although it would still be trouble, if Aoki is valuable enough at the time the situation arises, I could convince the elders to let him keep it… no, if that were the case I would ensure that Aoki would keep the eyes, he deserves that much at least. - jaspr3mthCommented
Reminds me of noob saibot
Just as the ferocious punch was about to crush Moses's head, a pair of pitch-black hands, appearing out of nowhere, emerged on either side of the man's face. Then, they forcefully twisted his head backward. - jaspr5mthCommented
I would of thought that you would save the ability of him summoning shadow minions after he absorbed gecko morias fruit and the ghost ladies fruit. It would make a lot of sense if he was able to maybe combine the powers of those fruits to be able to imitate the ability to summon shadow monsters like the guy from that manhwa story. The ability of the shadow fruit to steal a persons shadow and all that entails (fighting ability and whatnot) and the ghost ladies power to summon ghost to give life to these shadows.
They emerged silently from the abyss, crossing the boundary between the world of the living and the world of the dead, like specters suddenly materializing to fulfill Brook's call. Their steps were almost inaudible, but the echo of their armor resonated with a trail of darkness as they advanced toward the enemy. Each movement was calculated and coordinated, as if they shared a single mind. - jaspr2yrReplied to SabertoothX15
What do u mean by that?
"So are you." - jaspr2yrCommented
Damn was hoping you wouldn’t pair the mc with may. I try to avoid any harem tags but I’m running out of stories to read and I thought I would give this fic a chance but then I remember why I avoid fics like this. Good luck to u author, if anything ur grammar is ten times better then half the stories in this site.
"So are you." - jaspr2yrCommented
Awww why not tobirama :( Still Zabuza is pretty cool too :)
[Searching the Multiverse Randomly…] - jaspr2yrCommented
I really really really hope that u only allow sokka one bending. id rather see him become the best waterbender there is, to the point where even aang will have a hard time beating him using all 4 elements. Water bending is so versatile. Ice bending, blood bending, mist bending, cloud bending, plant bending. Maybe make him so profecient in water bending that he’s able to creat water out of thin air (condensation).
[You have learned Waterbending.] - jaspr2yrCommented
Hello! If u need some inspiration for water bending then search up Tobirama Senju. I always felt he would be so OP if he were to ever end up in ATLA.
[You have learned Waterbending.] - jaspr2yrCommented
Shiba Aburame
Shiba has got the Aburame look down. Spiky straight black hair, that sticks back, looking like it just got in contact with electricity. A stoic face that shows no emotion. A long sleeved grayish coat with black seams that covers his whole body that goes down to his thighs, and black shinobi pants and sandals. But weirdly he doesn't wear the typical dark sunglasses that all Aburame frequently wear, instead he wears a dark purple scarf that covers the bottom half of his face, leaving his sharp and dark as can be eyes free for anyone to see, unusual for a Aburame. - jaspr2yrReplied to ArifuretaForever
Cool
I decided to go with a black and silver color scheme. I also have a state of the art HUD that will inside my mask. I also decided make some other modifications to make me even more mysterious. - jaspr2yrCommented
What is the difference between this system and all the other systems? Im sick and tired of all these system fics. (Sorry im ranting, dont mind me)
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What if he has telekinesis in the future, can he just make the book float near him freeing up both his arms?
2. The book must be open and held in one hand in battle. (Big handicap in a fight) - jaspr2yrReplied to
How are u supposed to bring out an emotion without memories? Cant just magically make ourselves happy cant we?
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