garion_Sanders

Hey I liked the chapter but big plot hole what happened to that hero during the attack?

I like it

Might be worth just having "had" and remove the "had and" to make more sense

"Had and had" I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean here author thanks for the hard work tho

You probably need to add "to" to the sentence as how use fat doesn't work Otherwise well done I'm just pointing it out as it's the only mistake I've seen so far

im a bit sad can we at least get the name or a link to the original you were translating please

thanks i loved it and dont stress about meeting the daily chap just try not to leave a week empty with no reason why is all i ask

it begins

looking forward to more chapters this first one seems quite good as an intro