I really like this Naruto story the only problem is, what are you going to do when you catch up to the original? (Yes, this story already exist in Fanfiction.net, under the name Dark Phoenix.)

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Just a small reminder. This is not how an argument with an elderly person whould go ( I am refering to the wand argument obviously). You could have argued that Neville was not only his father's son, but also his mother's, therefore, the result of their love would be a colmination of both of them instead of only the father. Now, I am not saying my argument would work better than yours, just that it is one that it has less of a wiggle room for Augusta to argue. At the end of the day, this is your novel and you can and will do what you want. This is just a comment from a fan of you and your story, that believes, said comment could be a stronger argument. Thank you for your hard work. I hope to read more of it.

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LUNNNNAAAA

no harem pls

no harem

Δεν θα την πειράξεις δαίμονα, και αν ξαναπροσπαθήσης, θα σε εξοντώσω. This is a right way of saying it.

I am from Greece, and let me tell you I was confused about what you wrote Author.

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