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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
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    The writing quality is good. The grammer is mostly correct. The action scenes are not cringed and are well written. Looking forward to next chapter. Hope you keep up the good work and continue to novel

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    HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Commented

    this chapter was good waiting for next chapter hope you would post it soon

    Ch 22 NEW LIFE
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    HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Commented

    keep up the good work

    Ch 17 Shall we start?
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    The Paranormal system!
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Commented

    Personally I liked the story it isn't rush covered details etc. And for the critiques, you aren't paying him to write so shut the hell up

    Ch 20 Life 1.6: Lighting blade-Part 2
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Posted

    Personally I am liking this story. This is a Fan-fic so it's upto Author on what to write and what not. Besides stop complaining you aren't paying him to write. So it's a good Fan-fic I would recommend it. It's not overpowered but it has lots of potential.

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    HighSchool DxD: Fan-fic
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Commented

    nice keep it up

    Ch 15 The voice notification.
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    The Paranormal system!
    Fantasy · AJPaturde
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Posted

    Good novel. One of the best novel I have read of this genre. Keep up the good work Author AJPaturde. Good writing. Easy to understand since there are no complicated words. All the best! Looking forward for next chapter

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    The Paranormal system!
    Fantasy · AJPaturde
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  • Lucifer122333
    Lucifer1223333yr
    Replied to Red_DragonEmperor

    It's good right

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    The Paranormal system!
    Fantasy · AJPaturde
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