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i dont think the mystery style suits you. like reverend insanity, lotm, righteous player. these novels are just as you described. not a lot is known but it still keeps you in. but here the world building is lacking. the mc seems like the only useful dude the others are here to fill spaces. THEN comes the issue of SHALLOW WOMEN which ruined the book for me. i love a logical, rational, self centered, cold hearted, vicious, greedy, rational protagonist who doesn't focus on women but his objectives. i think you as an author should understand very few people above the age of 16 would like/prefer harem or shallow women. it would be much better to have either no romance/ single romance or a WELL STRUCTURED HAREM. so far i have not seen any books have a well structured harem. its because you cant.
absolutely love your work. i just hope the fights could be more detailed and his interactions with people could be more detailed. it would be great if you spent a few tens of chapters on world building to set a solid foundation. this is a good novel with a new idea i just feel there is a lot of wasted potential.
i love this novel,great humour,great side characters and a nice cold blooded and sophisticated mc. i do have some questions i hope can be answered it appears mc has the ability to copy peoples powers(or even his own like 'vexing gaze')but cannot use it freely it seems? some conditions need to be met. i can understand in terms of others ability but why impose such restrictions on his own i wonder. what is the mc's class and power level mc does not take any active measures to increase his strength. does it increase passively or does it increase based on the strength of guild invictus? i love the overall story its a great joy to find a protagonist who does not fall to the usual chiche though i do hope that in future chapters author would shed light on the world and its power systems in detail. what happened to the previous tycon? did he die? sigh. i would be most thankful if my queries are answered, thank you.
Stupid and naive mc. Mc cultivated languages music and some skills for a decade and became saint level in those skills but cant cultivate so he just has to pretend to be a bigshot i have read enough of this to know where this would be going. It will be funny at first but then die to repeated misunderstanding it will just get boring.My disapointment is greater because i expected more from author of 'library of heavens path'.
i have read the raws for this the character of the mc is very inconsistent at the start he is cold blooded ,selfish ,profit seeker and smart. as time goes by you can see him turning dumb and then at 100 plus ch he just randomly offends everyone.side charecters are stupid. Enemies are all brainwashed and crazy with no logic or reasoning whatsoever. Overall great concept ruined by idiotic characters.