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- AN_135 months agoReplied to chichi32310
She is the main heroine...
- AN_135 months agoReplied to abhishek_korde
my brain hurts jut writing this chapter.
- AN_136 months agoReplied to Chonchonm
nope but in a comma.... having a massive writer's block and burnout... not only that personal life is going through a tough time.... sry folks...
- AN_13a year agoReplied to KuroWashi1903
if need to fix clarity and grammar use Grammarly.... its better than chatgpt, especially free ones...
- AN_132 years agoPosted
As of right now the story is too fast with slow update. Amount of dialogues makes it look like a script than a written story. Character is very bland. This fan-fiction is of modern family, but the character intersection feels off. Mc's relationship status changed way too fast, no added description. Needlessly created drama. Actions taking by MC is confusing with no apparent explanation. Time-skips and jumps are frequent making it hard to understand whats going on in the story.
- AN_132 years agoReplied to Anonny_Anonymous
My bad.
This paragraph has been deleted. - AN_132 years agoReplied to Sameet_Khadka
That happens when you work with a big studio that has a distribution channel. But I don't know the exact ratio. But it heavily favors the big studios
- AN_132 years agoReplied to Snake_Empress
!!?
- AN_132 years agoReplied to KingofPlatter
What? you mean is she part of his record label i.e Feather Columbia Records, then yes.
- AN_132 years agoReplied to shashank_bhatt
Then wait for the future, telling now will become like a spoiler. Better yet, I didn't plan that far ahead. So, far volume 2 has an outline. I have no idea what to write for volume 3 until finish the previous volume.
