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I like this concept as well. Although I would prefer if that bodyguard/assistant route would be explored, as it would be unique and have a new change to things than always having the mc making everything and everyone there pawn or in the dark. Like it would be cool if villains go after her because of her quirk and has her bodyguard or assistant or butler he would have to keep her out of harm while doing stuff to further along and help her in the dark.
As of chapter 4. So far, it is really good. The grammar is near perfect. The story itself has huge potential, the background so far is nice not too much is explained but only enough to understand his circumstance. It is unique with it being first set in Italy. I would will diffeiantly be waiting for the next chapter.
I believe that there is what we call sarcasm.
Do them?
I'm pretty sure the sever announcement doesn't include the mutated version and does the original spawned in one.
I thought it meant how much lifespan they were given for each cultivation tier
honestly in the real world, the amount of crimes he committed and has no remorse would lead him to get the death penalty.
why wouldn't a 5 year old sweat? unless you have some weird mutation that prevents you from sweating, everyone sweats.
The concept is great but the grammar is so bad, I only made it a couple chapters in before I just couldn't read anymore. The author doesn't stick to one sex and it makes it really hard to understand. I you like to constantly fix the errors while you read then great this is for you, if not just move along.