Fairuz_Keizo

The whole story is interesting but the ending is too easy. It should be like the story that explains how he became the god of cooking but he easily became a god.

the novel has potential, continue the writer, if possible make a murder plot

..............finally there is a novel that has a twist,keep up the writer's efforts, get it out

Thanks

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interesting novel but a lot of talking while fighting😪, does not dominate the opponent 😒and lacks experience in how to fight. I hope it will improve to be the best 🤗

to the author of this novel is indeed a good novel, but why did the plot change at the beginning of chapter 100, I am very dissatisfied !!!, the development of the story is very interesting and the characters are also interesting, but the development of the plot is really disappointing .haaaaaaiiiihhhhhh !!