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The updates will be as follow: 3 updates or chapters per month of which one will be over six thousand words. Any additional update will be far more free in its structure Stories:TJAD, OTTSS,Unbound

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    PA11102yr
    Replied to ReinAndHalos

    Thanks for reading and for the kind words. The updates are indeed slow, but at least I hope the content Is good enough. Until next year the next chapter will probably be out and it will be...

    Ch 11 Intermission: The mind of a Moster
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to NomadicWaffle

    Thank you for reading Reader-san. ~^w^~

    Ch 11 Intermission: The mind of a Moster
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Asayel

    Thank you for reading said chapter. ~^w^~

    Ch 11 Intermission: The mind of a Moster
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Bruce_Spears

    Truly? Hm. I suppose the chapter is packed with different points of interest , but by making into two it would be three thousand words a chapter. A moot point since I could increase some interactions but here is a behind the scenes on its structure. I did write like so for three reasons: To show Arc's experience, introduce some characters and make a showcase of Aiko character by introducing the reader to the rapid changes in the environment similarly how Aiko himself is slightly confused.

    Ch 1 Prologue: An early end
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to 8ightbit

    I try to overexplain stuff, even to the point of becoming extremely tiring, because I don't want to miss something or leave a facet unexplored. Dialogue is essential to give more "character" to characters rather me naming them Adventurer 1, 2, 3 etc.

    'I know.', I said sternly, only to speak softly thereafter, 'Yet I am immensely grateful for it. You help me enough by being there for me. So, as far as I'm concerned, you are not the system but ROSE! The one who accompanies this troubled man to this second life and the most important companion. If I say something stupid, I want you to express your opinion. Not simply affirming my decisions. After all we are in this together.'
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to 8ightbit

    Even if I am repeating myself, it isn't so much as I feel the need to do so, but the character of Akira feels the need to.

    'You are an existence created by the being at the very top of practically everything. You have a thinking process and are helpful to me. You are the most important companion I have!'
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to 8ightbit

    As a spoiler, Akira doesn't fashion himself a "saviour" but more a dangerous factor that could manage things. Whether those are beneficial or detrimental to the World is yet to be seen.

    Ch 6 A world can't be without conflict
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to 8ightbit

    A question in turn. What is Akira's personality? What are his thoughts? Plain as they seem at times, they are unable to counter all his character. The reason the transition seems so weird is a concoction of emotions. He genuinely died and was given a second chance with absurd potential to do things. The reason for such a "transformation" is yet to be given.

    Ch 6 A world can't be without conflict
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to brucespears

    Hm. I didn't think of making a discord to be honest but I'll think on it. You can freely comment and I will try to answer if given enough free time and I actually see it. Also the new chapter is up

    Ch 1 Prologue: An early end
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to brucespears

    Thank you and the next chapter is in the works.

    Ch 1 Prologue: An early end
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to ShotaDickWizard

    I shall plead the fifth! -No matter the fact an answer is already delivered, Even then! A customary introduction of certain... peculiarities this World and iteration of Danmachi has.

    "What did you call me!!"
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to ShotaDickWizard

    As do I for that matter, yet characterization post mortem is significant to lay some groundwork for who Akira Suzuki really is.

    I tormented myself for situations I had no control under and denied to release my emotions while hiding my problems behind a mask of positivity. It was better for all others. To appear as the reliable man that would help those he has connected with. Neglecting the spiral for negative emotions that gathered by my inability to ask help, as it wasn't something I deserved....
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Amv_125

    Also through phone I am far more prone to make mistakes and grammar errors so a "warning" was imperative! After all I could create a mistake in the meaning I want to present

    Ch 4 Resolution
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Amv_125

    Again I do not say we can limit any of the three Os-"half Omnipotent", "two-thirds Omniscient" etc. However we can use those terms not out of pure confidence but because there doesn't exist any other term to describe examples in fiction. Realities where characters can defy any form of logic through words and pictures. I do not state it is a genuine right term to use "Omniscient" under terms because as I said and ad you said- it is wrong to uitilze the words in such a manner. However, most of the times we do not have a better alternative and as sucg we have to step into muddy waters and use some words metaphorically and wrongly in lieu of presenting a meaning we want to pass on. In the end describing such complex states is nearly impossible without creating a problem in the narrative. Unless it is properly planned out and Rules exist! . Different Authors have different characters and different manners to explain such vart concepts of which I gave an example of a fictuous character described as omnipotent. Can Omnipotence be atteibuted to two characters and can a character give another true Omnipotence? Depends on the meaning we want to pass on. If the omnipotent being absords the second one, then by definition the other one would be omnipotent in conjecture of a greater whole. Fot two All powerful? "Different Worlds have Different Rules".

    Ch 4 Resolution
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Amv_125

    Also writing lengthy response through phone can be annoying! So sorry in advance for any misunderstandings or grammar errors! ~^w^~

    Ch 4 Resolution
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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Amv_125

    ~^w^~ Depends on the degree on what we define as Omnipotence. Is it the ability of a character to be untouchable by their peers and anyone in their World? Or is the definition of being incapable of defeat by anyone in any World? Or even the true Infinite powet that this God would possess? The first would be a yes should rules not exist. After all one true Omnipotent would easily be able to accomplish such a feat. As for elavating the being in question to their level... Let's put it this way: "Can multiple Being be Omnipotent? If so in what manner did they achieve it?" Omnipotent or any of the big O is a very complex subject as there can be levels. Not to say "He is half omnipotent" or "She is two thirds omniscient" but moreso our inability to properly visualize the true meaning behind those three Os. An example, If a character- Divine Being, Eldritch Abomination, Alien God- has the capacity to be untouchable in a World(* such as The Presence from Dc). They can be untouchable in their respective World however if we incoporate a sort of fusion between Reality and Fiction we can present another being on the same stature- Azoth. However those are "extreme" examples. Let's Say there was a character with the ability to know everything that happens in Earth at any point in time. In the most literal description we can provide that character is Omniscient under the confines of the Blue Planet. However how can we describe a character who knows everything that is happening at this very moment-not the past or future, but the present. How can we classify this Being? We have to say it is a level of Omniscience bwcayse they isn't a readily created term to use. Thus even the Three Os are under the influence of our understanding, because as words they cqn be utilized and more times than not misused because there doesn't exist a term to substitute the meaning we want to convey! So can they-God- elevate the character to their degree? Yes, though very-very unconventional means with- certainly- unwanted repercussions for the character involved. Note, we take into account the character would be able to survive the elavation and this God wouldn't simply db what amounts to a newr infinte*Big bang to the character's lap. However a simple statement under a different perspective can have many meanings. "Different Worlds can have different Laws" This statement is one that is as obvious as "Sun shines our Earth". You can take myriad series and compare them to undertand their structure are different. However it isn't an obvious statement but something far more... Unique. ~^w^~

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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Amv_125

    ... {+1 cookie} Nice observation! It does seem odd how a being of her stature-one that is omnipotent has restrictions doesn't it. The answer is,unfortunately, for the future. However I will pose a question in turn as I don't want to simply avoid giving anything away. (*Ahem*) "If God is omnipotent, can They create a rock heavy enough so they themselves are unable to carry it?" -First- "What does it mean to be Omnipotent? Does there exist a non-numerical value we can attribute to God's nature?" -Second- "How can one be Omnipotent? Is there a point where they arrived to said level? A moment in time where arrived in this infinite?" -Third- ... I do want to give a concrete answer but it is a question that the future will uncover. One Akira has in his mind yet didn't pondee over, in lieu of his currwnt circumstances. ~^w^~

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    PA11102yr
    Replied to Man_of_culture

    Rewriting actually.... Well in a sense? The first chpaters were incomparible to their successors. A noticeable drop in quality, writing style, talks, explanation etc. Despite my busy schedule. I find myself kinda ..."annoyed"(?). I want to write, yes- but I want to do in my best *******-ish abilities. A fact I missed due to eagerness to write in the beginning. Creating "more weight"/ chapters and not accoubting for the "volume"/ level of quality. So while not a genuine "rewrite", I go back and-at least in my eyes- better the quality while adding and taking cocepts and details. They will be uploaded, but as I am essentially going through 8k+ chapters (not counting extras) it takes time... Personal life, responsibilities, assignments, problems, stuff that need to be attended to... The list can go on! Nevertheless I prefer preceding like that as I have the capacity to better express myself and not be bugged by my self imposed requirements for a chapter.... Grammar errors notwithstanding!!! Can never get away from those!!! ~^w^~ Thanks for the kind words! Ps. The reply is quite lengthy in hopes of answering your question as much as I can without expnadibg on nuisances and many details.

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    PA11103yr
    Replied to Infinite_Shadow_57

    Thanks for reading it.

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    PA11103yr
    Replied to Not_ayin

    Because despite being a being unfathomably powerful- one so above everything, that doesn't equate to a lack of emotions. For someone to surpass a concept- one as complex as emotions- that being should have control over them and be able to express themselves. Not to cut emotions. That isn't tackling a concept to surpass it, but finding alternative ways to cut it off themselves. Akasha can express emotions and is far more interesting-in my opinion- as someone who can genuinely express emotions rather an emotionless alien deity. She is so above everything= it is frankly ludicrous. However Akasha can express herself however she wishes. As for her gender, the original -Akashic Records- is genderless and she can choose an Avatar- of the same power- whether it'd be female or male.

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