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Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU

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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU1yr
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    another trash......on webnovel

    Ch 2 The separation
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    Tsk! I am your Grandfather
    Fantasy · CosmosGalaxZ
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU1yr
    Commented

    problems with. flow.....grammer issues.....néeds an editor..,..#_#

    Ch 2 Chapter 2 The First Half of My Life
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    Harry Potter: A Certain Ancient Rune Professor of Hogwarts (TL)
    Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU1yr
    Commented

    quit!

    Ch 14 Blood of my Master
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    Rebirth and Reincarnation
    Eastern · Kumitzin
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU1yr
    Posted

    needs an editor. writing quality is meh meh........

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    WHAT IF I BECOME THE ENEMY
    Fantasy · ArgaNov01
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU1yr
    Commented

    unrealistic .!!!adapting so fast....need better execution....

    Ch 2 Kumogakure's Spy
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    Reborn in Konoha as the Anbu Torturer
    Anime & Comics · nyawdao2
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU1yr
    Commented

    the interactions lacks depth....

    Ch 4 The Princess
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    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Posted

    just a wish fulfillment,....,....niydo6routr6oro6dyiodi66dyd6odo6do6ddkdskysodkydykdskyskydskydkdludlydkddludldkudlfludkflfkdiysidisuhxngkhngjt

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    Rebirth and Reincarnation
    Eastern · Kumitzin
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Posted

    unfortunately , the main character lacks character. The cultivation setting has so much to offer but the mc lacks depth..lacks personality....It becomes more apparent as the story goes on.

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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
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    a human

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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    i love it...

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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Replied to NorthernWind

    kobe BRYANT BASKETBALLER

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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    g

    Ch 9 Possible exploit?
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    XP
    Realistic · OneFist
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    opm

    Ch 8 One Punch Man Opening Lyrics
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    XP
    Realistic · OneFist
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    xxx.com

    Ch 7 20K Xs
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    Realistic · OneFist
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    gh

    Ch 6 Max Word Count
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    Realistic · OneFist
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    h

    Ch 5 ?
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    Realistic · OneFist
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU2yr
    Commented

    thnxxx

    Ch 155 My Rip-Off System (III)
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    Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince
    Eastern · ZinonWonder
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU3yr
    Commented

    nice

    Ch 524 You Can’t Even Beat Me, and You’re Thinking of Challenging My Master?
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    My Disciples Are All Villains
    Eastern · MSRZP
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU3yr
    Posted

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    My Disciples Are All Villains
    Eastern · MSRZP
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  • Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU
    Daoist_YAMI_MAHOU3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

    Ch 1 Starting Over
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    Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God
    Games · Lucky Old Cat
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