story is down the drain, unfortunately. We'll for me, that is. I'm pretty sure the other readers like this.

I don't trust you.

I legit feel like your are burning yourself out. chapters have becomed short as heck and no progress of story at all. so I suggest you get a break go on hiatus relax and try to gain more muse for your stories cause they getting stale. you're to focused on getting to your end goal of powerstones/patreon that the quality has dropped by alot.like I said it might be time you take a step back for a week and relax from writing.

nah you're a wuss so I doubt you will do it.

captains log its the 23rd day of no update. current chapter is dissapoiting but I shall wait to see if it gets redeemed on the next chapter. it's been a long journey and I sign off. Godspeed.

that's disappointing once more. that's an amazing devil fruit.

oh so it might be happening. completely forgot that Robin and Mikita were looking for those.

I've been wondering why not go and kill Enel and get that OP devil fruit? been a while since I read this so I don't remember how much till canon starts but I think Enel was already around at this time no?

not gonna lie this chapter wasn't worth the wait. I had a lot of expectations for this chapter and it didn't even come close to them.

unfortunately we both know MC is a pushover.

so is she his slave now or not? cause I'm kinda curious and last chapter ended in that cliffhanger. or was it a joke from him? and if not then MC really is a pushover and I'll be left dissapointed once more.

so powerstones go to this one again

the only chapter update that didn't let me down. now if only he kills some of them. that would even better

nah dude I'm dissapointed and I can't in courage that

this has ruined my entire night

never got into fate grand order. now fate zero and fate stay night I love. and I did kinda liked the where Waiver was the protagonist. and honestly most of the dislike does come from the fact that you keep nerfing him. I tolerate it cause I know if you didn't nerfhim constantly all arcs would end in 10 chapters 20 if he was lazy.

I'm honestly considering it just to see how many chapters I'll have to skip in this arc

crocodile was planing to overthrowh a country and attempted the assassination and kidnapping of its princess. the king and queen should have enough right to call for an immediate execution. would the Marines even care? crocodile IS a Pirate. most Marines didn't even care or like the shishibukai and only tolerate them cause they where necessary. seems like an excuse for youbto cause some unwanted and unesessary drama.

should've tried to see if he could make genjutsu and train in it. cause you know...... that little thing called Chakra. but dude is honestly more of a druid type fighter than a shinobi type fighter. But you know thats just what i think

hmmmp a faker that believes themselves as the original. you have brought me some pittance of amusement so as king is shall forgive you and tittle you as my favorite jester. as such I shall give your book a chance to be read by someone as magnificent as myself. but besides that let there be a revolution! for we are kings!