Ayman_Messaoudi

nationalism novel with a lot of background comments from side characters every time the mc does something ,,🤢🤮🤢🤮with no characters development and a follow the rule mc and trust country and the higher-ups with masters and favors throwin up left and right

https://www.qidian.com/book/1039060495/ SAY THX

https://www.qidian.com/book/1039060495/ SAY THX

the novel was pretty good in the beginning but it went down hill so fast after he started telling everyone about his power starting with his brother whitch i barley accepted then he went to share with the elf who can tell anybody about it . it felt like the author made him dumber he gave him the start of a ruthless mc then changed to a friend power mc wtf it made wanna throw up

realy good but after chap 650 it went down hill with so many filler chapter i started skiping chapter hoping for something good. i dropped it so you know what i found!!

the concept is good but the execution is soo terribly bad . i love an evil mc or a profit oriented mc that does what ever it take to achieve his goal but forcing the plot to limit an evil mc is just bad . if you wanna make an evil mc he need to be in control of everything he need to be 1000 steps over his enemy not some mc who only react never attack . btw the story flow is so slow with one relevant chapter in every ten.