Not much to say yet as you're mostly reuploading things, closer to version 2 too I see (Which I like as it gives hope for earlier-canon and the Fallen Angels XP), so best of luck and looking forward to when you're caught up again!

I was wondering why the other story stopped updating, didn't realize you rebooted it again, hopefully this time it will be the definitive version XP? Either way, looking forward to more, and hopefully you keep things now being pre-canon so Riser can add the Fallen Angels to his Harem still, that was my favorite thing of the 2nd version. Good luck writing!

Always good to see the Fallen Trio getting what they deserve in a much 'useful' way than just killing them off, always feels like a waste XP Looking forward to Riser 'welcoming' Asia at Kuoh given he took care of the Fallen before she was around, which makes me wonder how early in Canon this is: Did this happen before Raynare asked Issei on a date? Because if it did he just outright prevented him from turning into a Devil. And I wonder if this means he will meddle with Kuoh earlier than in Canon, even visiting the academy to approach not only Rias and her peerage but also Sona's (Which was sadly absent from the previous version), or even Aika and the kendo girls XP

Yep! Given this started pre-canon, looking forward to Riser hopefully handling Rias and her peerage faster than in the previous version too. Also, with the Fallen out of the way HE has to be the one to 'welcome' Asia once she arrives at Kuoh I guess, so that's gonna be 'interesting' XP

Always nice to see the Fallen Trio getting what they deserve, and together to boot, way too many people, even reincarnated/self-inserts just kills them off despite what easy catches they are (So weak even Arc 1 easy could beat the strongest of them while she had Twilight Healing, LOL) and sexy bodies they have XP

Sounds 'fun' XP Hoping Mittelt is there too, though, all 3 Fallen girls should 'stay together, LOL

Great chapter once again! Also, gotta say, wasn't expecting Riser to already have both Gabriel and Kalawarner...if he has the latter, does that mean he also has Raynare and Mittelt as his servants? Hopefully!

Sounds great, looking forward to it! (And as mentioned to hopefully Kalwarner and Mittelt coming with Raynare XP) Also hoping Sona's peerage gets a turn, even if just a group-chapter, they deserve it XD

A bit sad that Riser's actual peerage is apparently gonna be 'benched' until Grayfia is fully conquered, they're all cuties/hotties that don't get enough lemons honestly, but good to know he still plans on it, and hopefully this time Grayfia falls much faster XP Also hopefully this is pre-canon too so he can just conquer Rias and her peerage (And Sona's too I hope) without having to deal with Issei or the Rating Game like in the previous version, I feel is not only much faster and better but seeing the same rewritten again would be a bit boring :3

Given how late this is in Canon I thought Raynare was already dead, but if you have a way then yeah, more girls to the Harem is always fun (Still wondering if you're gonna make Le Fay show up early given Kuroka did, or deal with the girls in Sona's peerage too since she was added to Mitarai's). Though if you're adding/resurrecting Raynare then you should add both Mittelt and Kalwarner too, to make the Fallen Angel Trio stay all together XD

Great to hear! I'm also hoping for Sona and her Peerage tbh, especially as she would BE confused as for why Rias and her peerage are suddenly so "gone" lately. And Kuroka should come 'join' her little sister too, as well as Le Fay and eventually Ophis :P

Thanks for another chapter! The twins are always great, especially when their 'issues' are basically solved right away like this...wonder if their first time is gonna be in a threesome XD? Also, surprised Kazuya hasn't conquered all the TLR human school girls yet, compared to the issues with Yami or Nana have naturally, even Haruna, they should have already fallen much more easily honestly ;P

2 things: Did you change how Koneko looks or something?? Her description in this story seemed oddly different (Nevermind making HER be Sona's childhood friend) Second,who is Akari Faulkner?

Author-sama, I would like to help with that! A while ago there was a crossover of DxD with a Senran Kagura gacha game, and the character Murakumo cosplayed as Gasper as part of the crossover, creating the arguably best example of a Female Gasper I have ever seen (Only different thing is that the eyes should be red because of Gasper being half-vampire, but still XD):

As much as I'm enjoying the story, I really hope the Rito-hate-train stops soon, it feels not only distracting but extremely unfair given the MC's double-standard for Issei, honestly. Looking forward to Yami's turn too, though!

Thanks for another great chapter and congrats on Haruna for her first time! Still think the anti-Rito focus of the MC feels a bit too mean, especially after his forgiveness regarding Issei, who even if he may be better MC is literally a worse person than Rito if we take away everything else that makes both special, so hopefully that can get toned down XP Also, a small thing, you shouldn't Spoil which girl comes next because it takes away from the suspense of wondering which of the TLR Waifus the MC will conquer next, at least that's what I think, and really, surprising he's not gonna get Mio and Risa faster than Yami given how much 'easier' they're to get in comparison, or even Yui :P

No matter what anyone says, there is no better (And easier) TLR Waifu to enjoy first in this world than Lala-chan :3 Great work, looking forward to the full TLR Harem forming! (And the eventual cross-harem orgies between TLR and DxD wives XD)

No need to worry author, just go at your own pace, the story is great and real life always comes first too! As for the chapter, it was fun and enjoyable, and to be fair to Zastin in Canon he WAS the greatest swordsman of the galaxy, the problem is that the series is a harem comedy and not a Shonen so he was cursed to be the eternal "bad luck" character, always getting ran over by trucks or attacked by dogs, so he never really got to show off, but he DID easily hold his own against Yami in her first appearance, the same Yami who is the universe's greatest assassin and whose Final Form literally had an attack that could CUT THE PLANET IN HALF...and Lala using her whole power stopped said attack :3 (TLR gets wilder than one may think at once glance, that's firmly on the upper tiers of DxD power-levels after all XP) So yeah, Zastin is a lot more powerful than he may seen without needing to be buffed than Canon...he's just extremely incompetent because the series demands him to be XD

Finally Lala time, nice! She's a great but massively underrated waifu, as much as I loved Darkness and it made me appreciate Momo and Yami a lot more it made me sad when it shifted from Lala being the main heroine XP So is great to see our MC here seducing her so fast and ready to give her the love she deserves! While the system said "Rito", I'm still hoping you made the AU change him to Riko so it's easier to deal with in general, but at this point we can only wait and see, so best of luck writing more!

Surprised he didn't mention also wanting Luvia, the Prillya trio, and the female Servants in that long speech of him, LOL, seems like Shinji allowed himself to be honest for once...maybe that will actually do him some good, letting it all out? Either way, great work and thanks for the chapter!