Marchewmen

can you swap to : "most certainly"? feels more heimer

And for most champs, you still feel like they belong there. Sad rito didn't capitalize on it last 4 years before arcane.

I like this politicking you cook there author. Viktor being pushed to his old design there, good hehe.

Man does it feel good to read about tensions and politics of piltover and zaun, the mc actions have impact on the world. Plot with what mc changes is believable, and reading dialogue in this fic is great.

Pre season 2 Viktor is so compelling.

lol you can try to use ai to correct this, just paste to gbt chapter and tell it to make your dialogue with - to "" and see if corrected stuff is easy enough to edit. you have ai tool, you can use it :)

I would prefer battles to force object inside for him to teleport. Some Jojo style combat.

Feels unnecessary for Reito to lie about supernatural.

nevermind

Wasn't Scalpel too heavy for normal power humans?