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May she rest in peace

Mary MacDonald just looked it up doesn't hate Severus it just people trying to pin what another Slytherin did to her on Severus cuz I guess one one Slytherin in seventh year assaulted her whether or not it was sexually assault or just assault I'm not sure but I'm pretty sure she was obliviated so

Okay I will try to help with how they will react I'm not a good writer but I can guess one of the Marauders like James or Sirius would not want to believe it so would think that it's lying Remus and Lily would be willing to believe it but at that point it's obvious that this is after the lake incident so Lily thinks Severus is too far gone but if she saw evidence she'd be happy to know that he's not on the death eater side Dumbledore would be curious on to why Severus is his most trusted man if Lucius and narcissa saw this Lucius would be quiet as to get more information while narcissa would outward be neutral inward be more on severus's side Peter pettigrew is a follower so he probably act a way that would benefit him mary macdonald from what I read does not like Severus albeit I don't know why exactly I would have to look that up Avery and rosier we're not not the smartest yeah but they would stay quiet cuz they're not that dumb again they would want to get information Miss pompry you know the lady that was in the infirmary would be happy for Severus I would assume because he was always in there but the rest of the teachers it seem like they had favoritism towards James and the rest even when Severus was in the right but if they saw the truth they would change their tune cuz they would feel really really bad not severus's head of house at the time I forgot his name but it was the potion teacher in the sixth book sorry this is really long to read

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maybe a phoenix to be symbolic since death and rebirth

I don't know what exactly type of summoning you should give him but I would suggest giving him something based on a type of ninja he's going to be in the future and I don't know all the summonings in Naruto as much as I hate to admit it but really choose one based off what he's going to be in the future but I was thinking either snakes or something you could add to the story like a made up one

this is good I've been looking for something like this and to answer your question about whether or not he should have a training Arc he probably should just so it makes more sense hope you continue this

Thank you for the chapter

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The body probably doesn’t have the strength it needs

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