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LaosPL11mthCommentedReminds me of A Will Eternal
Every few years, a few decades, or even a few centuries, the fragmented face would open its eyes once for several breaths.- LaosPL11mthCommented'I really don't understand how he could have changed so drastically, and he really has become like someone else, but I have a hunch that Ying'er is hiding something from me about his change.' Zhu Yuhe kept muttering in her heart, as she looked up at the clear sky, but suddenly she saw Xia Tian's face in the clouds. 'What the heck!? I must have really gone crazy! I even saw the clouds as if I saw his face!'
- LaosPL11mthCommented"So? Let's continue to dual cultivate again, Little Qi."
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Not gonna lie, just began reading and already had a chuckle. Killed in a forest sounds so ridiculously funny. After a few obnoxious reads with no world building I am quite tilted, and here I am again seeing something like this.
His father had been killed in the forest many years ago, and he has been raised by his mother ever since. In addition, he still has grandparents, he also has two aunts, and he also has two cousins who are the children of his first aunt. - LaosPL1yrReplied to damfn
Yeah, it's ridiculous. As most of things in this novel are.
"If there is a decent amount of essence in the letter, I might be able to know some secrets with the help of Eye of Osiris that you both are supposed to get for me. So you better succeed. I'm making a really big investment on you with this ring." - LaosPL1yrReplied to DiostdmQXYU
Nah, it's just author forgetting his own writing, no need for excuses.
"He can't come," Lira chimed in. "She might not be able to harm you in this place, but it's not the same for Gabriel. She can kill him if she realizes who he is, and I'm sure his aura will give away his identity." - LaosPL1yrReplied to hello_there_6426
Exactly. The prime example is Dune - after the Earth's human civilization liberated themselves from the tyranny of machines, they gave up on computers - but not science itself, it would be ridiculous since it encompasses plethora of subjects.
"Ultimately, the humans that managed to survive learned a lesson after all this... They didn't want to repeat the same mistake again, so they just gave up science altogether. They started living the basic life." - LaosPL1yrCommented
The man the man the man the man
The man also had a silver bracelet on both his hands and a silver pendant around his neck. - LaosPL1yrCommented
Absolutely disgusting. In other novels, I wouldn't even bat an eye if some villages were slaughtered based on context. Here however, this ridiculous slaughter stems only from one thing- incredibly low IQ of characters. In the first place, they showed for no reason they are Dark Mages, blatantly rolling into village and threatening them. They should have literally slaughtered them first, without having any conversation if the outcome is still the same. I hate novels and authors, who forcibly reduce IQ of their characters and bend novels plot based on this. Disgusting.
Lira didn't tell Gabriel what she did, but even if she did, she didn't think Gabriel would've cared. She had given those people an option to save their lives by keeping their mouths shut, but they refused to listen. She didn't believe she was in the wrong. She just did what she had promised to do. They were in the wrong for making her do it! - LaosPL1yrReplied to hello_there_6426
Just this situation shows how absolute ridiculous writing of this novel is...
Throughout the day, painful screams echoed in the village as bodies kept piling on. - LaosPL1yrReplied to TheFallenOne
Incredibly childish right? It reminds of two young people, who think themselves smarter than they truly are.
"You might be the only person in the world who won't look at me like I'm a Devil, despite knowing both my elements," he answered. "Just like I'm the only one who won't judge you. If you want to change the world, you'll need my help. And if I want to fight back and become stronger, I'll need your help." - LaosPL1yrReplied to Cubozoo
Author's naivity influences his book - this has been a major problem for newbie writers, especially pre-20 years old. They are simply inexperienced and it shows.
'Did she realize it was a test?' he wondered. 'Her explanation is exactly why I wanted to use this as a test. Because I knew it was impossible since Grimoire won't select me if I contribute to the death of its owner." - LaosPL1yrCommented
Sometimes, when I read about an MC, who had been betrayed literally after his death trusting someone based on the person's eyes... I wanna strangle someone.
Gabriel noticed the pain in Lira's eyes. For some reason, she reminded him of himself when he was stabbed by Maya… those eyes weren't lying! - LaosPL1yrCommented
Wow, seems like author forcibly lowered the IQ of the world. I am escaping this ship, before I sink too deeply.
"What a pity. He had talent but not the mindset needed to cultivate the talent." As soon as the clock hit five, the Head Priest stood up. "I guess we were too hasty in offering him a position. Not only did he run away, but he also insulted us by refusing this position without even coming face to face. That idiot." - LaosPL1yrCommented"If I had not done what I did, how else would I have been able to win the trust of Diwu Qingrou? Although those soldiers are dead, I am saddened but hold no regrets!" Tie Longcheng said coldly. "They may have died but the lives of six hundred million people of Iron Cloud have been spared! Without their sacrifices, Iron Cloud would have been part of Great Zhao's territory 8 years ago! Not only would we have not lost our sovereignty and territory, all of our citizens would have become slaves to the nation of Great Zhao!
- LaosPL1yrCommented
Phi, filthy casual. He is shaking from the thought, it might take him over 18 000 years to find. What is this number in cultivation world 😏.
"Ah… Eighteen thousand years…" Chu Yang felt his head spinning as his eyes were seeing spots. - LaosPL1yrCommentedThe creature in Tan Tan's hands was a strange-looking fish. Its body was completely black and it had no scales at all. Its eyeless head was large and round. It was a rare species that was hardly encountered! The fish was not very big in size and probably weighed no more than half a pound.
- LaosPL1yrCommentedMeng Chaoran was flabbergasted when he saw Chu Yang spit out that demonic dark mass. Unable to control himself, his eyes opened wide and his mouth suddenly uttered those words. This… this was the impurities from his meridians!
- LaosPL1yrCommentedChu Yang laughed coldly and said, "First, you come to Purple Bamboo Garden to cause trouble without the permission of the elders. Second, you were the ones who beat people from Purple Bamboo Garden first. Third, … we already agreed that I would help elder martial brother a little, have you already forgotten that already?"
- LaosPL1yrCommentedQu Ping flew into the air like a rubber ball. He fell to the ground like a rock. He cried pitifully in pain as he curled his body up, wriggling on the ground, sweating profusely trying to endure the pain. While still mid-air, blood was spilling everywhere, but the moment he fell down, a layer of frost quickly covered his whole body. The mysterious cold qi caused his wounds to seal up and the blood to stop bleeding.