I like this story so far. There are editing errors that should be looked at. It would improve the story if they could be fixed.

So I like the story so far but there a lot of editing errors. If they are fixed I feel the story would be better.

she is getting cuter

Only if we had a layer to cover our bodies to keep us safe.

this is getting good

that is sad that she needed attention so bad that she would make up a lie like that.

I have missed reading this book.